I just found this story and I hope that you aren't stopping on writing this.

splendid writing..

I like this fic, the characterizations are fun and the action is awesome. I love it when characters learn and develop as people... which is honestly why I started getting frustrated with the cannon Naruto series. Luckily there are awesome fanfic writers and fics like this one to satisfy my love of good stories!

Review continuation: or "I'm." However the opposite could be said about characters like Shisui and Naruto, where they would respond to things by saying "yeah" instead of "yes," and have a less formal way of addressing themselves and others. Also adding a bit of Naruto's speech tick of "dattebayo" would help with being a bit more in-character. 3. And finally, we come to characterization. Although minor, it kind of bothers me. Both Shisui and Naruto seem a bit too mature than they should be. Naruto would be more excitable and energetic at his age, regardless of improvement. Because of him being calmer and more mellowed out than the Naruto we all know and love, it seems like the characters aren't very 3-dimensional, and the dialogue seems scripted instead of natural.

I couldn't help but notice a few things about your story. Although it has a great plot, there were a few things wrong. 1. It's too dialogue heavy. It would be nice if you describe the surroundings, or little habits a character has. There's almost nothing to describe transitions, and less telling gestures/movement. 2. The dialogue seems slightly off. Some words are missing, and out seems like the speech patterns of certain characters are OOC. For example, the Sandaime, Itachi, and Iruka would ask talk more formally than most, saying "I will" or "I am" instead of the informal "I'll

that was good keep the chapters coming

If you say overall one more time I'm going to slit my throat.

Too bad we didn't see a fight.

Also... Not sure if it was explained but what happened with the reward? 1.550.000 ryo... Did Yamato save it for him, or it was divided between all of them? I don't know much about economy in this fic but if Naruto sell middle-quality explosive seals for only 350 ryo, I suposse it's big money even if it's divided.

Nice chapter, thanks for the update.

Fantastic chapter, looking foward to when Rin tells naruto that she knew his parents and who they are and kaskashi knows them too etc. keep up the good work.

Dosent Rin being alive kinda nerf the whole plot?

Hiashi gave out that Uzumaki info way to freely. The chakra chains were unique to Kushina...

I hope you make it clear Naruto is far ahead of the rest of them, seems more focused on Yakumo/ocs atm.

They didnt really have a good grasp of skills in the beginning tbh. Third Hokage took out a revived 1nd/2nd and Orochimaru and then the First is apparently the strongest Hokage?

The way I see it Kakashi is the strongest in the village after the Hokage with Gai right behind him. Jiraiya and Tsunade above him if they were there.

Itachi and Third Hokage stronger than Orochimaru whos equal with Jiraiya but Id say a bit stronger than Tsunade, whos stronger than Kakashi.

My opinion anyways.

Great chapter so fa.r

You know since Naruto is being evaluated by a psychologist will they discover his deep and buried hatred for the village and everyone it. Plus the fact that Naruto was so good at using his mask that he even fooled himself until he accepted his dark side at the waterfall of truth