Reviews for White Shores |
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Sarah chapter 1 . 3/29 Continue with this story please. Also update on this story I would love to know what happens next in this story please. Plus let Aragorn fall in love with Elen and let her fall in love with him let them get married after they defeat the bad guys please. |
RebornRose1992 chapter 4 . 9/15/2019 Omg keep goint! |
TaurelinStar chapter 4 . 7/16/2018 You really should finish this story! It's amazing and awesome! |
Twitch88 chapter 4 . 6/22/2016 Excellent. I love their first meeting. Lookingredients forward to the next installment. :-) |
asjfhjkhlajshkjasdh chapter 4 . 6/21/2016 It's an update! And this story continues to grow on me. It has this little something I keep looking for when browsing the archives. P.S.: Strangely enough, I delight in the fact that Elen can't sing. And Aragorn near Bree means it'll be Hobbit time soon? Keep it up! Katosade |
angel897 chapter 3 . 3/26/2016 thrilling start |
asjfhjkhlajshkjasdh chapter 3 . 3/18/2016 The Rasmus? A song befitting Elen's character I would say ;) Let me tell you that I really (!) like the way you write (excellent choice of words, poetic even), though I wish the chapters were but a little bit longer... Or maybe I'm reading too fast, haha. Anyway, nice job! The window scene was particularly beautiful. |
Arianna Le Fay chapter 3 . 3/18/2016 oh was it aragorn :D and why didnt gandalf left her to rivendell? after all she is elven |
Arianna Le Fay chapter 2 . 3/11/2016 thank you for the description and for sparing elen the pain of selling her body i am so relieved and happy :D but when will you reveal elen past and heritage? |
ballyhara chapter 2 . 3/11/2016 another great solid chapter revealing more about Elen & her mother's history. I took down Lead Me Home as I find I can't write about sed person without getting upset still so... |
ballyhara chapter 1 . 3/10/2016 below me all I will say is wow really good first chapter, not too heavy & intrigued to find out more about Elen. |
Arianna Le Fay chapter 1 . 3/10/2016 oh your story is amazing absolutely amazing i cant wait to see the truth about elen past and family :D what age does elen have in this chapter? can aragorn be elen first and only lover after all she would not want to become her mother... hope you update soon |
asjfhjkhlajshkjasdh chapter 1 . 3/10/2016 Hey there! Your writing is beautiful and I'm very much looking forward to reading more. The way you introduce characters, superb! Keep it up :) |