brilliant

Fucking brilliant. Absolutely brilliant

Please continue.
I miss Roman.

This was pretty good. The neo body snatcher thing was different wish we would have seen an example

Please continue or make a sequel.

Bad ending

I'm gonna drop this novel. I got past Ozpins conversation with him but this is just stupid. Why not implant explosives into the guy? The technology is there. The ultimate card to play. It's too stupid that they don't have any way to make him more loyal Lol

For all you Renora Shippers (that's just about everyone).

What about us ntr freaks?

Lmao not like this.

I wont review chapters with long authors notes.

Oops. Sorry I meantthe author DOES NOT come across as pompous".

Author does come across as pompous.

Recommendation: Redact.

50 points for keeping the character true.

Couldn't agree more. There is a need for more stories on Roman torchwick being Roman Torchwick.
His character is already interesting, and shouldn't need any real adjustments.

This is a riveting story thus far, even if I'm (thus far) a little uncertain why Roman would have been left alive as he was. Seeing Roman scheme and outwit others is interesting, seeing as he never truly got to do to his fullest in the show given the clarity of what side he fights for and an unfortunate demise.

Whew boy. This was amazing! I think it was a pretty accurate portrayal of Roman, I loved Neo, and watching everyone's interactions was great! I will say over time it turned into more of Weiss' story, which is not bad at all, Roman just didnt develop while everyone else but Weiss in particular did. I dont think that's a problem at all, villains aren't meant to have character development most of the time. I just have one question now, will this continue on into a series or is it just done? Keep up the good work man! Bezerker21 out!