This is damn good, one of the best stories I've read. You are definitely worthy of being a best selling author my friend, can't wait to read more of your writing!

I think you should go with the Revelations route. It's the route that has the happiest end and I'm a sap for happy endings.

Now that's a way to end this little story. Personally I'd like for Corrin to choose none and go the Revelations route, or if not side with Nohr. This is all assuming you're going to continue this or start another story as a continuation. Will you? *hopeful stare*

Sorry, but this story and any future stories from you not being Azurrin is a deal breaker for me. However, I do wish you luck in any and all future endeavors.
Good luck!

Corrin must be angry with everything, Takumi being Takumi, Camila being Camila.

Nothing seems to be helping along with what just happened to his mother.

About Takumi ... it seems like you have something against him as the way he appears in the story, he also has a feeling as if it were two or three different characters, the immature young man, a manipulative member of the court (or manipulated depending on the point ) And finally someone who is totally against Corrin with or without reason.

Funny I had seen a picture on the Internet where Corrin had taken his own life here, the reaction of everyone as sad as it was was perfect, but this is not going to happen in this story, even if it can be an omake of everyone's reaction to that.

Huh. It's interesting enough seeing this getting continued. I vote you do you. The story of Fates is like a slice of Swiss cheese that is more hole than cheese. What was there had...potential, but didn't go anywhere. Regardless, whichever route you go, beware. For here there be plot holes. Lots and lots of plot holes.

Fates and 3DS fire emblems as a whole have a bright colorful pool of characters ripe for interpretation and fandom craze, but they tend to have issues with world building, plot cohesiveness, and characters being OOC/making stupid/dramatic decisions for the sake of the plot, fates being most guilty. I have no doubt you could tackle any one the stories and make it interesting, but if I could put a vote in, I'd say either go for a severe surgery on the mess that is revelations, or maybe even patching togeather your own alternate 4th route as one of the reviewers said before me, would be fun to watch, reasoning being that although revelations is my least favorite route of the three in terms of gameplay, I love seeing and being able to play the whole cast, and I've always considered it to be cannon in terms of plot. Anyways, love the writing, keep it up mate

So I just discover this story and I love it. Good job writing this.

As for sequel I believe you have enough talent to pull your own route. It doesnt have to follow the other 3. Make it special, creative, something the writers from Intelligent Systems couldn't come with it.

However I do have only one complain, and that is Hans. I know in the beginning you wanted to make him a literal demon, and that is fine, but after playing Fire Emblem Echoes: Shadows of Valentia I came to realize that pure demon just doesn't work. Take for example Slayde, he is shown at first as a cruel knight that is almost similar to Hans. But as the story proceeds you began to see he is just a survivalist and a coward rather than what we saw at first. And if looking at one of the memory prism you can see that he doesn't want to do anything with what Dexais wants, yet goes along because he is scared of him.

Now I know Hans is going pure demon so there isn't something like a humane thing of him, other that he can... restrain himself? I dunno, all I know is that he could have a tragic backstory that we can look and say "boy I wish it didn't happen, but oh well" or "If he had taken the other route he would be alive, but he didn't, what an $$0£!" get what I mean.

Just give it a through, it could make a difference.

Thank you. I didnt need a full Fates playthrough, but it feels nice to see this.

Oh wow. This is one of the last fics I thought would update. A pleasant surprise if it ever was one.

I am extremely anxious if you would even pick up this fic again (odds are you won't) and about which route you would chose. Each route has its merits. Birthright is definitely the easiest to hammer out as it is the least train wrecked plot line and character development out of the three. You don't need to tweak all that much. Also the bitter taste of betrayal, if done right, would be the most poignant as Corrin would have to abandon the family that raised him, rather than some (important) people that got reacquainted with him for a week.

I would believe that Conquest would be the most radical departure to the Fire Emblem formula as Corrin would be a belligerent instead of a defender. This route will have Corrin face the most internal turmoil. Asides from the fact that he has betrayed his birth family, he has to live with the fact that he is an active participant at bring ruin to Hoshido.

I believe that Revelations is the hardest to tackle but may be the most satisfying if you manage to pull it off. Revelations' biggest flaw is the fact that Corrin is an innocent flower that can do no wrong that somehow manages to get his siblings to turn their backs on their respective countries to help him on a fool's errand. In order to make Revelations into something good, major plot points may need to be overhauled. It would be very interesting to see how a more jaded, competent Corrin would handle the third route. I personally would like to see a Revelation fic on the fact that you get both slices of cake and the fact that you can actually deal with the big bad behind the scene.

That being said, if you do decide to pursue the Fates fic and chose whatever route, I would be waiting as the quality of your fic is always more developed and fleshed out than your counterparts. I have a firm belief that whatever you chose to pursue would turn out to be good.

Hope you update soon and, to borrow a phrase, Nagaspeed to you.

Wait so is this gonna be continued? I thought it was discontinued indefinitely. Not that I'm complaining, but tbh, I didn't like fates all that much. But anything from you is something I'd love to read :)

I must said that you should re-done the entire fic, hear me out, fates can have a good story but this is not like invisible ties, here the thing is a mess. I think that you should watch Blazing Knight video about fates story and how to improve it, specially the villains that they are a dissapointment, and mikoto is perhaps the worst plot device of the series.
Also, (this is enterily personal) I would like to see the story with female corrin, now that she is canon

There's more than what meet the eyes behind the scene. I'm sure you will do your best uncovering the third party.

So this is it for real this time? This story is really over now, right?

It is good to see this story alive again! Thanks a lot for giving this another chance. For the story, could it follow Revelations with some drama of the other two stories?