Hello!
I'm a fan of your story Team 7's Ascension, both of them. Actually I've already finished them and read it a couple of times!
I just got back to my account and I might as well say hi and give your stories a review.
I love how you wrote the events and the details, and the plot! Oh, and of course the character! My favorite scene is the chuunin exam arc and when the team fights in Suna.
Well, I think that's all. Keep writing!

O quê você mais gosta animago? Capítulos longos.
Qual é a sua ficção do time 7 favorita? Esta.

Xxx

AAAAAAAAHHHH SEGUNDO LIVRO! ESSE É O MEU PÃO!

I think you tried to make the story too realistic and you focused too much weakening team 7 that now they're shit shinobi with nothing but luck on their side

Ugh I'd rather see less of Hinata.
But I am still enjoying this enough not to run.

Ouch

Fifteen might even be considered late tbf

Loved the story - I felt that the length of the war made it feel more real, and it was as depressing as it should be. The subtle plot twists were amazing. Will there be a sequel?

what did naruto ever do to u to make u hate him so much that you would write a fic about it?
pathetic really.

What a shitshow of a story. In every so called realistic AI, they behave like a proper military village, except the fact that Naruto isnt wrong. Trash.

It was an incredible story. The dialogue and descriptions were great and creative, and the characters well fleshed out. l still think the war stretched on too long. There was a sense of stagnancy which wasn't there in blood wings, even though you constructed so many different scenarios. I loved Naruto's torture. I feel like it would've been even better with a more canonish Naruto, but i understand you wanted to avoid this going to romance territory. The wind royals were also really good, and the twists were amazing. Thank you for sharing this with us

I won't complain about your original characters. Your whole world is more epic and well developed. Better than the original Naruto universe in plot and substance in my opinion.

Naruto was a bit dark and lost in this. It was a bit too dark and gritty for my tastes but probably the most spot on story of life as a shinobi. It was very well written too. Overall great story.

I hate that you killed Hinata. But your story is still amazing just a bit depressing

You are one heck of a amazing author have read all your stories and I hope you keep writing because your stories are how I imagine the naruto universe should be if they had make it more adult and realistic

are you planing a third part? cause this is the shiz, right there. loved this story the while time.