| Reviews for Harbinger |
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Eris chapter 16 . 8/21 Great and funny chapter. Hope you update soon. |
AugustMoon259 chapter 16 . 8/16 Alistair and Danny spend enough time with each other. They don't have to be together in Danny's dreams too. XD I also really love that Wendy and Ember call each other Red and Blue! Poor Danny...his friends trying to set him up with a girl, lol. |
Guest chapter 16 . 8/9 Oh ho ho, I like where we’re heading here. ;) Now that things have settled down a bit, it looks like our heroes can relax and do normal high-school things, like crushing on each other and forming rock bands haha. Oh boy, I can’t believe Danny’s parents actually went towards the fight in the trainyard. It’s good that they were far away enough that they couldn’t make out anybody’s faces or features, but the gang may need to find ways to disguise themselves if they still want to fight ghosts secretly. And on a related note, it looks like Mitch and Jazz are starting to get a bit suspicious about their brothers’ strange behavior, so that might be an issue later on. We finally get some info about Wendy’s sword! Based on what people have been speculating, it does seem to have belonged to a certain Scotsman. If that’s the case, then there may be a chance that the runes on the sword may bring his ghost back. I can only imagine how he and Alistair would get along, that would be hilarious to see haha! Thank you for the fun chapter, it was fun to read how each of the characters interact with each other outside of heroics. I'm looking forward to seeing how Ember performs! |
Shinobi scribe of the kage chapter 16 . 8/8 Want more! I actually wanna see what happens at the auditions and what the next ghost gonna be and how you'll adapt it to this world? |
Sean Malloy-1 chapter 16 . 8/8 Great work on the conversations |
gordhanx chapter 16 . 8/7 Well, are certainly looking interesting. After a pretty humors bit between Norman and Mitch, we get a bit more creepy as we travel through Danny's subconscious to see what's going on with the ghosts, now that they're trapped inside Danny. It was a cool visual, with a good show of how the ghosts are kept at bay, even when they're merged with Danny. Though something tells that at some point, their binds are going to come loose. And when it does…it ain't gonna be pretty. And unfortunately it seem Jack & Maddie are still as ghost crazy as ever, as they become drawn to the recent spring of haunts. No doubt bringing trouble to Danny later on. The gang meet back up with Ember, who tries to hit on Jazz (it does not go well XD ), before suggesting that Danny hook up with Wendy. Now there's a ship. While I would rather see him with Sam, who has remained mysterious absent recently, I guess Wendy's not a bad alternative. Other then that, we get some interesting new info on Wendy's sword and Ember's joining a band with Soos. That should be fun. Anyway, good work on this one. It's a little short, but with some good info. |
coldblue2015 chapter 16 . 8/6 Thanks for updating and this was a great chapter! Neil: Well, Mitch is going to take notice of his brothers odd behaviors. It not looking a their Mom's Yoga/Exercise tapes, but more of Neil looking more...suspicious. I do like exploring Neil and Mitch brother dynamic more. It going to be interesting to read Neil change/grow with Mitch noticing his brother changing behavior. Danny and Alistair Fenton: It rather interesting to see Danny subconscious/mindscape sealing away the Box Car Ghost and Lunch Lady Ghosts. It seems that Alistair does not have to full possession of Danny and uses his spectral arm to go through Danny head to connect with Danny mind. Jack and Maddie Fenton have interesting NEW dynamic of videotaping Danny and his friends Ghost Fights! I mean, that legitimate fame and Ghost Detective work, so good job for Jack and Maddie Fenton. Interesting to read Jazz teasing/rejecting Ember...What is that about? Is Jazz sending the wrong signals or is she dating someone already. I have to admit, I do like that Danny friends and ancestral grandfather are being supportive/teasing the idea of Danny going out with Wendy Corduroy. Wendy is someone that Danny does admire, but does not want to take that risk in relationship...yet. Danny does notice Wendy attractive features and is interested in the Magic Sword that been passed in Wendy family for Generation. Now it seems Danny and his friends are going to support Ember her band opening concert. Ember McLain: It is interesting to see how Ember become slightly more famous as Singer/Rock Band, but also what Ghost's will come in to interrupt her opening concert. I forgot. Was it a School Talent Show or is Ember auditioning for Rock Band? I will have to re-read that. Ember friends are glad to support given that no Ghosts are involved. Questions 1) Should we expect a Ghost to appear during Ember tryouts for Rock Band or possible Concert? 2) Are we going to have Jack and Maddie become a National or Local news program, when they record/search for Ghosts? 3) Will Mitch take notice of Neil odd behaviors and link that to Norman, Mable, Dipper and Danny? 4) When will we get Wendy POV of a possible attraction to Danny? 5) Should we expect the Corduroy Family heritage/legacy to be revealed with Danny and Alistair help with where the origins of their Magic Great Sword comes from? Suggestions 1) It could be possible. It would be nice to read Danny and his friends take care of the Ghosts, while Ember performs. Sort of solidify how more their friendship means. I can see Ember appreciating how far Danny and her friends will go to make sure he dreams come true, even fighting the Supernatural in her absences and the Supernatural almost ruining her chances at her dream. 2) I think Blithe Hollow would give Jack and Maddie Fenton a local network. Probably something to do with the Ghosts. Maybe the News/Media would call it the Haunting Hour, where the strange/supernatural mysterious in Blithe Hollow are recorded by Jack and Maddie Fenton related to Ghosts and possible supernatural encounters. Sort of showing Jack and Maddie Fenton actually getting paid more and being taken notice by her talents. 3) Again, I love to read more Neil and Mitch brother dynamic. I could see Mitch using his observation skills and a little detective work to notice Neil hanging out with different people besides the local outcast that is Norman. I could also see Neil notice Danny being apart of that group and questioning Danny later, as protective older brother after all. Mitch does care about Neil well being, after all. 4) That would be nice to read. Sort of mutual attraction, but neither character admitting their feelings to each other...yet. I would like Wendy to have her moments of attraction towards Danny being notice. What makes Danny attractive and interesting to catch her eye, besides his Ghost Powers. 5) It would be interesting. Alistair Fenton was interested in the Occult and Supernatural, so even he would be interested in the Corduroy Family strange/powerful Magical Great Sword. Sort of like some History in the Medieval Ages, but links back to the Paganist Celtic Tribes that were kept alive in certain Scottish Clans and that the Corduroy Family used this Mystic Great Sword as the legacy that connects them as Warriors and Celtic Magic. Maybe Pariah Dark could be the Scotsman version of Aku, but with a "Danny Phantom"/"Samurai Jack" theme and just use different characters. Maybe Pariah Dark was a Roman General that rose to be leader of the British Isles with Roman Expansion and created Hadrian Wall, while battling Celtic Pagans until Pariah Dark wanted to become King of his lands once the Roman Empire fallen or failed to truly conquer these Barbarians and failed to bring order to the Empire. Keep up the good work, stay healthy, and stay safe! |
AugustMoon259 chapter 15 . 7/3 So much was happening, I couldn't wrap my head around it. I love it! |
erica.phoenix16 chapter 15 . 6/3 Thanks for updating. :) |
Del21 chapter 15 . 6/1 Wow talk about a double whammy! Awesome chapter, can't wait to read more! |
Guest chapter 15 . 5/11 YES, UPDATE! And what a great chapter it was! After a few initial mishaps, the gang finally found their groove in ghost-busting! I have to say, I felt nostalgic reading Dipper and Mabel’s portion of the fight; the fighting methods and bantering between the twins really reminded me of the tone in Gravity Falls. And I was cracking up after reading Dipper’s botched attempt to banish the lunch spirit: “Noodle?” Hahaha! Also, Norman seems to be a natural at using his medium powers; after hearing Stan saying how hard it was for Mike and Lydia (two young adults) to banish ghosts, it looks like Norman is more powerful considering he’s a kid. It’ll be interesting to see if he will master the power to control ghosts in the future. Speaking of ghosts, Dipper’s idea to contain the ghosts inside of Danny appears to work for the time being. However, I’ve got a bad feeling about it…it seems like it went too smoothly. I feel like there’s no way that sealing the spirits of two malevolent cannibals inside of a single person would not have any bad side effects. It might not be apparent right now, but I have a feeling that it’s going to take a toll on Danny as more and more ghosts are sealed inside him. We shall see… Thank you for updating this story, it is one of my favorite DP crossovers! I can’t wait to see what happens next! |
Eris chapter 15 . 5/7 Awesome chapter. Will we see other Ghosts like Clockwork, Frostbite or Cujo? Danny could get a power upgrade from the ghosts like frost powers or the ghostly wail. Hope you update soon. |
Sunrise Phoenix chapter 15 . 5/4 Man this chapter was action packed! I loved it! The guys truly won their first battle, and hopefully things will be calm for a bit. Danny does have a point though...so far there's been two ghosts who are cannibals. Wonder if there's a ghost that's like Jason from 'Friday the 13th'? (Or are you basing the ghosts off of the 'Danny Phantom' series?) Either way, keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter!-Peace Out! ;D |
Frosty Wolf chapter 15 . 5/4 The Butcher, way scarier than the Box Ghost. Not that he was a very high bar, but still. |
gordhanx chapter 15 . 5/3 Well, I guess it's time to beware XD . Now that the gang's aware of the Box Ghost's appearance, it's time to deal with that crate creep. Seriously though, it was cool learning about this world's Box Ghost, tying him in with the Great Depression making him more sympathetic & terrifying. Also, we've got a very interesting to defeating the ghosts. Namely just seal him inside Danny, since he's all ready a conduit for ghosts. It certainly is a unique way of dealing with it, though one no doubt with plenty of downsides. With that, they got to fight the Box Ghost, only to be doubled teamed by him & the Lunch Lady! Good to know, that even in this world, that ship is sailing XD . Thus beings the fight, with our mystery solves taking on the duo and their kids. And it definitely was quite a tense & horrific battle, as the ghosts continue to be creepy AF, though everyone manages to pull through, with a little bit of teamwork, clever thinking and magic. And with some luck, they seemingly defeat the Lunch Lady's children, and many of our team, namely Danny & Ember discover some new abilities. That's cool. And with that, they manage to seal up both ghosts inside Danny, who thankfully isn't possessed.…yet. 20$ says he's going to feel some side effects soon. Still, really good chapter. Keep up the good work. |