| Reviews for Zootopia-Nick's Nightmare |
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Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2018 cielos hay pesadillas que da cosa |
Somebody else chapter 1 . 5/9/2016 Emotional. Like it. Write more. |
Kelsey chapter 1 . 3/9/2016 Nice fanfiction, though I do see something that can improve. When a character speaks, you should make a new paragraph; it helps with clarification. Also, when you're starting a new scene, like when Nick arrived at Judy's apartment building and was going up the stairs, you should start a new paragraph. (There's a lot of things that should start a new paragraph, by the way.) |
Black ninja chapter 1 . 3/8/2016 Nice job |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2016 Gosh I'm crying |
Knife Hunter chapter 1 . 3/8/2016 You should continue this fic... Good job |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2016 I loved it! |
SSJDark Drakus chapter 1 . 3/8/2016 great story |
Fantasyever chapter 1 . 3/8/2016 love u r writing...u did so good I wouldn't have guessed you were a beginner! |
Fantasyever chapter 1 . 3/8/2016 love u r writing...u did so good I wouldn't have guessed you were a beginner! |
All Things Animated chapter 1 . 3/8/2016 Good job! |
ktrk5 chapter 1 . 3/8/2016 beautiful ! nice work ! |