I enjoyed it very much, but it ended too soon. These are the kinds of variations I prefer but unfortunately they are usually one shots so you don't get the satisfaction of seeing where they go.

Hey!
Nice - I like how he was honest and Bingley was great in this, refusing to listen to the Greta Advice... :3

Alicia :)

I like this alternative to P&P! What would be the obstacles to come forward if you had finished this version hmmmmmm~
Christinebj

Cute!

This was good. So wish it was not a oneshot and it wiuld keep going! Thanks for writing it.

Cute!

:) Very nice

Very nice story, I would not mind it turning into something more :)

It's so good that I wanted more. The way you ended it makes that possible. I encourage you to think about it.

I liked your story, but it did falter in a couple of places, no doubt due to English not being your first language. Keep up the good work!

Wonderful story. You omitted a word here and there, but it did not detract from the story itself. I would not have the courage to write in another language! Now I wish I could accompany the gentlemen to Gracechurch Street.