Reviews for Child of Hogwarts, Part I: The Lion, the Snake, and the Chamber
Hamster chapter 30 . 6/2
Hello

I wanted to leave a review. I loved your story a lot. At first I thought that Harry was a bit out of character compared to the canon, more childish, vulnerable etc. But I didn't really mind because I always thought that Harry, as well as Hermione and Ron sometimes, was too mature and wise (not too clever but really too wise) for his age in the books.
My favorite thing about your fanfiction is certainly Albus and Minerva relationship. I just love them together. Your Albus is more soft than in the books, but I liked it. I love how they take care of Harry.
My second favorite thing is Severus, I love how he is in your story, and especially his relationship with Albus and his growing affection with Harry.

Overall this story is a bit fluffy and all, but I can't say it's not pleasant to see some cuteness even if I'll always like the canon story more.
I also really liked some additions like the sentence the Sorting hat said to Harry in the chamber, the way Dumbledore goes to chit chat with Grindelwald (and I must say I really enjoy a lot your Gellert Grindelwald, and I always wanted to have a deeper insight into his relationship with Albus).

I'm going to read your sequel to this story as well now. Thank you for the hard work.
QuestWithAmbition chapter 30 . 5/21
Amazing story, I love it!
QuestWithAmbition chapter 29 . 5/21
I love the inclusion of Grindelwald, he’s such and interesting character
QuestWithAmbition chapter 26 . 5/21
Oh my gosh ahhhgwiwbe let’s hope all goes well!
QuestWithAmbition chapter 20 . 5/21
Desperately want Harry to go see someone! Shouting at my screen doesn’t seem to help him though
The story is amazing!
QuestWithAmbition chapter 12 . 5/20
I loved reading about the explanation behind Occlumency !
QuestWithAmbition chapter 11 . 5/20
Remus is here! And I wonder how Dumbledore will deal with Harry’s comment..
QuestWithAmbition chapter 10 . 5/20
Harry will be alright - that is a wonderful sentence and sentiment
QuestWithAmbition chapter 8 . 5/20
Absolutely loving this story - it’s allowing me to escape into another universe!
(Also sorry for the typos in previous reviews - I did not double check and noticed them only after hitting post )
Thank you for sharing this story!
QuestWithAmbition chapter 7 . 5/20
What an interesting development! I wonder what would have caused that reaction...
QuestWithAmbition chapter 6 . 5/20
Your characterisation off everyone is amazinf! Snape - snarky, not the kindest person but still human. Dumbledore - caring, well worded and a twinkles in his eye. And McGonagall as a quidditch captain!
This is a wonderful story and I’m enjoying it so much.
QuestWithAmbition chapter 5 . 5/20
Absolutely loving this story!
QuestWithAmbition chapter 4 . 5/20
Dumbledore taking action, and reacting in that calm angry way just feels right - this is the Dumbledore I want to see! Thank you for allowing me to discover this chracter properly!
Guest chapter 14 . 5/4
You know... with all the hype about the Weasley''s Clock, I'm rather comfunded as to just why it never picked up on the presence and use of the diary... something to ponder I think.
AngelMoon Girl chapter 5 . 4/28
I have to say, I’m really enjoying this story :) It’s well written, and feels in character - I especially love Harry, Dumbledore and Snape! I’m happy Harry has gained a new family and home in Hogwarts. I can’t wait to see what trials lie ahead and how he grows from them. The fact that you are going to turn canon on its head should be fun!
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