| Reviews for The Asteroid Belt |
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Bella Gracelyn Prentiss chapter 1 . 4/20 This is so funny. |
Hercules8 chapter 2 . 5/6/2018 A very nice and sweet story! :) |
Toaofwriting chapter 3 . 5/1/2018 Great stories, very heartwarming. I love J'onn's relationship with Alex. |
Pearlphin chapter 1 . 9/6/2017 I'm dying of laughter. I have never laughed so hard while reading that it should've taken 5 minutes max ended up being 20. I love the first chapter. I love how it started off as a joke and ended up being taken very seriously. |
Old Emerald Eye chapter 1 . 5/7/2017 This is a beautiful thing of beauty. I am enshrining this on the list of Things That Have Actually Happened at the DEO. |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/5/2017 This is the funniest story I have ever read. I was laughing so hard during the first chapter |
Felan Lupus chapter 3 . 12/19/2016 Thank you! I loved the first chapter, and this one was amazing too! Are you gonna do a version of ch. 1 for Kara? That would be funny. |
Killjoys4Life chapter 3 . 11/28/2016 Chapter 1 OhmyRao, that was HILARIOUS! Chapter 3 John Jones... Aw J'onn saving Alex when she was young... PERFECT. |
yeratimelord-katniss chapter 3 . 11/16/2016 This is adorable and amazing and I really can't believe I haven't discovered you earlier. You are amazing |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2016 Awwwww! This is just adorable! I love how the time has progressed, and man, Kara! Wait until Alex hears about this! I love it, especially the last part with him telling her to get to medical and essentially grounding her. Thank you so much for writing this, I can't wait to read more! |
Guest chapter 3 . 10/24/2016 Awww! Another perfect scene! Oh my gosh, this is awesome! Thank you so much! I love it! Please, PLEASE write some more? These are all amazing! |
ironhair chapter 1 . 10/4/2016 haha... poor Alex. |
carlotta1924 chapter 1 . 10/3/2016 LOL this is totally hilarious! I personally want to smack the agents' heads myself, the rumour actually went that freaking long. Great job! Movin on now to the next chapter :D |
supergirl and tintin chapter 3 . 9/10/2016 Oh God this is do good! I love the part where Alex has to those kidnappers and then J'onn coming to save her. That was really good. Maybe you could wright one where Alex figs out that J'onn had helped her all those years ago. Just an idea |
Starblaze Knight chapter 3 . 9/10/2016 I absolutely love this chapter! All the family feels of J’onn Jones keeping his promise to Jeremiah by coming to save teenager Alex from kidnappers is just perfect. That line about Alex thinking Eliza loves Kara more hit me so hard because I don’t believe it to be true. I think Eliza loves them equally and of course she wouldn’t endanger one daughter to save the other. The emotions that Alex was going through, how she acted while speaking to the operator, being nervous about wielding a weapon and being terrified of her abductors, was spot on. Imagine if the kidnappers could see Agent Danvers now. LOL Excellent job! |