Really powerful story - absolutely loved it! Nate's lead in was brilliant - glad the team was there too.

Ooooooh, I got chills. I LOVE Eliot. First this, now The Librarians, he kicks butt and do NOT mess with the 'adoptive' family, no matter who you are. I'm a big sis and I see the big bro in him in both characters and it just connects, especially in the subtle things he does. This just... my heart, yes, he needed this heart to heart and I accept it to my head canon that this took place because now, how can I not. Nate would not have let this go and the spying, yeah. They wouldn't be far and wouldn't have said a word over hearing that. I bet they came running to check when Nate yelled when Eliot stopped breathing. 10/10

I really liked your story :-)

This is so sad! but well written.

Love it!

Marvellous! I applaud you for finishing this episode that failed to highlight the things which Eliot Spencer did and continues to do for his team, family in reality.

The many of mystery will always have his secrets, but this was a lovely insight into how the team feel about their own personal enigma. For that, I thank you

You did an awesome job with this fic- most TV or movies aren't able to delve into that emotional side of things, and you added the perfect amount to it. Thanks, and great job.

Yeah... wow... this was excellent and so real.

My heart was pounding along with Eliot.

Wow! That was emotional and intense, and, you are so right...absolutely necessary after that episode. I rewatched the episode yesterday and it sent me running to hoping to find something related and I stumbled onto your fic. It's brilliant. You got into Eliot's head and Nate's. Wonderful! I hope you will write more moving on from this point...more about him trying and how the team reacts to it all. Brilliant!

Absolutely love this new story! From the first to the last word it got to me. Keep sharing your masterpieces with us!

More than the cons (which I do like), I enjoy the interaction between the characters. This story was excellent!

Excellent work. Really read true to character and added a lovely bit of extra emotion to the episode.

that was beautiful. So like a scene from the show that it would have fit seamlessly at the end. Bravo

Love it. This look at Eliot is one we don't get to see a lot. His struggling with letting the team in. The things he protects them from. Wonderful!