This is wonderful. I love the way you show the demon here.

Ahahaha, this was so nice to read! I love how Bayley can even befriend Finn's inner demon, never thought it would enjoy eating popcorn. Now I will never unsee that again xD And oh man, Bayley and Finn playing with Legos together... too cute for words! :)

this was so cute. i love how you made finn and the demon separate. the best part, is of course, that bayley is friends with the demon.

i really liked how she just understood the demon was his own entity, how she didn't have to be afraid. her knowing the demon liked popcorn had me all heart eyes. and the way you described the flash of black across finn's eyes, was so good.

you eluding to the demon, but not having him fully emerge was a great choice, i thought. the glimpses were enough to get the point across.

i loved this. please write more of these two.

love it

This is a delight. I love to see Finn & the demon written this way & how typically sweet of Bayley to be a friend to both.