Reviews for Atonement
UnknownReaderViewpoint chapter 43 . 5/7
Since the start of new arc I feel confuse and start skipping the chapter and only read XXX scene. It gotten boring, it would be good if there is no demension travelling. and countinue normally in the satsuki's demension
28SilverSkates chapter 43 . 10/30/2019
This story is so good! I love every bit of it. Keep up the good work Shadow. I cant wait to see more great content.
WindbornesWord chapter 1 . 9/2/2019
Fucking brilliant, loved it. Especially Hiashi’s reaction and comment. This is definitely getting a follow.
St.Alessia chapter 13 . 9/1/2019
I’m finding it really hard to keep reading. Sasuke is so beyond ooc that it’s getting to be annoying. Most of it is super cheesy too. I also have no care for what every single team is doing at the exact same time as everyone else. Minato as Hokage would never ditch the village all willy nilly to go have a vacation/mission with genin. I want to ignore the Pokémon inserts because I like Pokémon and I’ve played those games since I was a wee lass. But seriously, it’s too much. I liked the idea of sasuke going to the past to save his clan and I’ve no qualms about genderbending, with a little love with Itachi but this story could use a makeover. This is meant to be constructive criticism which may as well be ignored. I’m not someone to bash on someone else’s story since I genuinely want them to succeed. And yes I realize how old this story is lol
Eikyuu Sonomi chapter 43 . 8/27/2019
Interesting scenario they found themselves in for this one. Not aging shouldn't have really led to such a crisis though. There are so many ways people die that even with people procreating way more than usual the total population would've still been sustainable. And there are so many animals that procreate faster than humans ever could especially when sea life are concerned. There are many illogicalities going on here.

Also laws punishable by lethal injection or other methods to ensure death would be put in place to ensure population count stays manageable like how in our own real world China temporarily had law in place that families couldn't consist of more than one son and one daughter when it came to the children to keep their population from overgrowing more than it already had since they were facing a food shortage issue. That is not even to mention how criminals in prisons would be on the fast track to a death sentence to alleviate an overpopulation issue if things had really just gotten so bad that killing some of humanity off would be the only real solution. Forget them being young because nobody's aging the fact they're criminals would be enough to put them on the chopping block.
ltulquiorra chapter 1 . 8/27/2019
Omg. Hiashi's reaction was hilarious
Anaelyssa chapter 43 . 8/27/2019
New chappie yay yay yay, thank you!

Ok, the start confused me because you said two pairs of heads: that's four people. But then only two pairs of eyes? Or... two two-headed people. I think (hope) you just miscounted.

Cute, cruel, mildly hot.
iTyncWithReality chapter 1 . 7/15/2018
oh my god Hiashi! LMAO!
Annin chapter 42 . 7/9/2018
Please update soon.
Bri chapter 33 . 4/23/2018
He's Sasuke's sex slave, hahahahahaha, that nonchalant tone killed me.
Anaelyssa chapter 42 . 4/5/2018
I'm loving this story, especially the different situations they find themselves in and the deep love they share for each other.
Anaelyssa chapter 33 . 4/5/2018
I really wonder what happened to all the Itachis and Sasukes that went back to their home dimension after our main characters messed it up.
Anaelyssa chapter 4 . 4/4/2018
Sasuke's good.
Anaelyssa chapter 3 . 4/4/2018
Oh this is so amusing.
Anaelyssa chapter 1 . 4/4/2018
I liked Hiashi's reaction the most.
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