Tell them Kyoya!

I might wanna punch Iemitsu at the end :

I got excited thinking you were gonna put 1827 in here, but then I read the note at the end Don't even know when I started to like that ship. It happened naturally from reading fanfics lmao

I'm glad Tsuki finally came around! And yay! Hayato :D

Ahhh, so Cielo and the others in the masks (except for the evil one) are Tsuna and the guardians from a parallel world. I get it now. Not gonna lie, I was a bit confused, but things make some sense now.

I love stories that showcase Hibari's soft side for Tsuna! ...making me all soft and whatever :3

Honestly, I am worried about Tsuna... Stubborn one and I hate the fact that he does that. I can understand about the night flames but at least he need to be honest. Being stubborn and pushing people away could only make it worse for his condition. _

Yes! a sequel

Storie is great but, I think you need to rewrite your grammar upRenHaru

You can't say Tsuna is THE NUMBER TWO HITMAN IN THE ENTIRE WORLD and then pretend he's such a weakling that all it takes is killing intent to make him freeze in fear. That's still the number two best killer in the entire world, if he can't even handle some light killing intent from the number one then what's his title worth? Nothing, that's what. That weirdness along with the overexaggerated emotions and an inability to behave like the hitman he's supposed to be really put me off this story :/

Why's everything so overexaggerated?

I love the story but all the grammar mistakes are bugging me.(not trying to be mean or rude)

at this point, both Tsuna's dad and masked man identity are pretty much crystal clear, Author-san XD

Okay, why Tsuna and Riku are in Tsuna's house? In the end of last chapter Tsuna and Henko were going to start Tsuna's training, so why they are in the house?

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY, IM excited for the sequel!