Reviews for Rose
triforce jutsu chapter 6 . 4/3
I have a bit of confusion. Sakura doesn't exhibit any symptoms of DID at all. Not in a true diagnosis sense. Also, im confused how sasuke went from remorseful dad and ex lover to one dimensional bad guy who is legally and physically threatening Sakura. It just wasn't sense to me. The relationships here, idk how to explain it... Idk why sakura likes naruto or naruto likes sakura. You mentioned shes a doctor in this story, but all i read is about how much they like fucking each other. Im surprised it's not stressed how much he loves Sakura's work ethic, intelligence, or love for her family. Which, it's great to like to sexual element of a relationship, but that seems to be it. It feels like a superficial relationship. Idk. You have lots of potential as a writer, but the characterization needs a bit more depth, in my opinion. Best wishes.
tranquilitea chapter 9 . 2/18
This fanfic is so good! I know you last updated in 2016, but please consider continuing it. I just love the way you write all the characters here and Naruto and Sakura’s relationship is *chef’s kiss*. I’d love to see what happens now that Sasuke drop the case.
Mono chapter 9 . 12/20/2019
Oh my god..thats a VERY GOD STORY..AM ALWAYS FAN OF NARUSAKU..CAN FEEL SO LEMONY GOODNESS..DAMN HOT...Please update again
Wes1382 chapter 9 . 5/15/2019
Plz continue dis
Fluffy-Akumaru chapter 9 . 5/6/2019
Please continue. This is absolutely BEAUTIFUL!
Fluffy-Akumaru chapter 6 . 5/5/2019
Yes Naruto! Protect your girl. Also, someone needs some serious therapy done. I think that the curse of the Uchiha clan was secretly placed in this plot LOL AWSOME CHAPTER!
PS: YOU BETTER GO SHIKAMARU LOL
Fluffy-Akumaru chapter 4 . 5/5/2019
YAAASSSS! KUSHINA WOULD DEFINITELY LOVE SAKURA!
Has this thought ever crossed anyone's head? Like, how would the Naruto series went if Minato and Kushina were still alive? In my friend's opinion, she thinks that NaruSaku would've happened because of what his mother said to him. BUT at the same time, I feel like Kushina or Minato would be trying to get Naruto to notice Hinata too. BUT, Naruto would notice her, but he probably wouldn't take interest in her because of her personality. Naruto tends to be attracted to the ones that are more like his mother! LOL! Love the chapter!
Fluffy-Akumaru chapter 3 . 5/5/2019
PERIOD SAKURA! TELL HIM AGAIN! "YOU BETTER BE GONE BY TOMORROW MORNING!"
Thank you soooo much for making Sakura look a weak and childish in this chapter. Too many people are doing that instead of showing her true potential, but hey, that's fanfiction for ya!
Love the chapter!
Fluffy-Akumaru chapter 2 . 5/5/2019
I fricken love this book! Sarada's a trip... LOL! This book has inspired me to develop Sarada in my own story I'm writing. No worries though, it's SO not as AMAZING as yours LOL!
GwendyMary chapter 9 . 1/17/2019
Is it wrong that suddenly I feel bad about Sasuke?:(
I'm in here chapter 9 . 12/24/2018
I really love the originality of this fic. Hope you come back to this sometime in the near future :) I would love to see this completed.
Red Reaper88 chapter 9 . 7/24/2018
Love it.
animelover5181998 chapter 9 . 5/12/2018
Please please please update! This story is too good to leave it off at this point!
Heavenly Celestial Queen chapter 9 . 4/18/2018
So i hope you update quickly
really want to know what happens next
great story
update soon
Useful76 chapter 9 . 2/27/2018
I like where this went. Started as a simple steamy lemon and turned into a nice slice of (real) life fic. Good stuff. Interested to see where it ends up.
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