Hi! Despite having been following this for years I've only just read the last 10 or so chapters. It's fantastic and I can see why I followed it all those years ago. this has to be one of my favorite takes on Canon divergence where Ned lives and Jon doesn't take his vows. Even though it's been like four years since you've updated, I hope you come back and finish it, because it's amazing!

Genial historia espero con ansias porque puedas continuar con ella.
Enserio tu historia es muy buena pero creo que le falta algo y eso seria que estas creando mucho caos creo que ahora para que eso se acomode deberías hacer que Aegon VI para que tenga una batalla contra Stannys y Jeffrey para que la alianza Stark-Tyrell-Martell-Tully-Aryn pueda solidificarse para luego agregar a Tyrion a la alianza así posteriormente podrías crear un reino unido de todas las familias líderes.

i really wished that you would've made dacey a bit younger in in story so she could be paired with robb

This is one of the few fics that I'm genuinely enjoying. I look forward to seeing where you go with this story.

POST ANOTHER CHAPTER BEFORE I PISH MESELF!

So satisfying to see everyone playing into littlefinger's scheme. Now the Tyrell host is going to back off most likely. Will they declare for Daenerys when she makes it over the Narrow Sea?

But.. but.. but he's already betrothed! gahhh, I guess I'm only put out because I have a crush on Dacey, though. Warrior women are a turn on.

So Robb executed a Stormlander under the authority of King Eddard.. but the stormlands are not a part of the Northern Kingdoms. I imagine he does have the right considering the crime happened on ground the Northmen fought on and won, and can thus be considered their property, but I wonder if it would have been better to let Dondarrion pass the sentence.

2 but tell jon

The whole heir to the throne is a mess. Daenerys is the rightful heir unless stannis gets to it. Hope Daenerys makes it into your fic and would be awesome to have her end up with robb

I hate that margery. Shes ao fake and conniving. I hope robb doesnt fall for her. In fact, i wish he and daenerys would get together...

How can varys believe jon is the rightful heir to the throne if they all think hes a product of rape? Meaning, to them, it was by force without marriage thus, hes still a bastard from a rape?

I really think this is one of the best chapters so far, and the story is amazing in every new chapter I read! I read the first four chapters on a bus ride and at times I really couldn't stop grinning like a fool.
But what I love about this particular chapter is:
*Renly and Margaery genuinely caring and loving each other
*Littlefinger's arrest
*King Eddard's Declaration of Freedom for the North and Other Demands and the people reacting to it.

I also admire that you are able to write such long and yet still completely interesting chapters.

I know it's been years but I hope that one day you will update this again, because it is almost everything I have ever wanted to read in an ASOIAF fic.

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a shame the story has ended here.. a good and very realistic story

This was a great read and I wish you continued it