can you write more chapters?

This AWESOME ! ! … Please UpDate ! ! ;P

Hell yeah Emma. Tell her...

You did good to include Leroy, he's grumpy and funny. I'm laughing like crazy, we're having a moment sister lol

Loved the little moment between swan family and Killian. Hope, we can see more of it. Also, Emma needs a friends lol

For some reason, I thought the wolf was Ruby, but I remembered Graham. But now, I'm confused why lead Emma to the docks... great chapter...

Who's the kid with Regina. Great chapter. I have other questions but they can wait

I really hope you update this again soon! I love this story. Emma's relationship with her sons is written so breathtakingly well. I love Killian's presence in the story and I really would love to read more!

You said in an Authors Note in an earlier chapter than Roland has a part to play and that's why it's Roland and not just an OC kid. I would really, really, really love to read the part where that comes into play. I'm wondering about her 'friend' that's not even named, yet seems to have played an important part in her life if Emma adopted her kid. And Roland's father? Wondering about him too. Like I said, I would love to read more whenever you update again. I hope you haven't given up on this story, as it's amazing in a whole lot of ways.

Awesome story, loved it beyond words. Please continue to update cause well all be anticipating it. ;)

Sun an inventive rewrite of season 1! I hope you continue it!

I o e this book can't wait for you to update

Please please please please please update soon

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I absolutely love this story! Please please update soon!

Fantastic story I loved it and I can't wait for more please update soon