This story is still just as amazing as ever. I am captivated just as before. I can’t wait to see more

Oh my gosh what-?!
Please don't wait too long to update!

Oh my god! I wasn’t sure if wolf Link was going to be a thing in your story and I am real glad that he still has that power! And the Twili are now a thing in the story too! I thought so, but again, I wasn’t too sure. Does this mean Midna will be making an appearance? What kind of situation is the Twilight realm in, since everything is Doreen from the game? I can’t wait to find out!

Can I just gush some more about how you write Link and Del’s relationship? My favourite scene is the one after the hot spring, where they’re in the room sitting on the bed and talking. That whole part where Link calls her beautiful and then is testing the waters, to see if a kiss would be nice and Del turns away and he LEANS BACK! He doesn’t say anything, doesn’t make a fuss, he just leans back and continues the conversation. I love this so much!

Though I do want them to kiss at least more then once before Del has to leave.

I am absolutely in love with this story and I can’t wait to read more! Thank you for sharing your story with us and I hope you have a great day.

I’m so excited about the new chapter. Can’t wait for the next one! :D

AHHH I am so excited to see how you write Link’s wolf form! I love how you write Link and Del, so I can’t wait to see how this changes their amazing dynamic. I like the darker take on the already darker Zelda game, as always your writing is so fun to read! Great job! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

I want to cry so, so ,SO badly. I hate cliffhangers with a passion, but I love your story so much and I’ll find a way to wait patiently for your next update.

Darn it... I was sort of hoping this chapter would never end. This story is brilliant. I'm sure everyone who's read it has told you so. The only problem I have with it is that chapter 17 isn't already sitting ready for me.

Del is just awesome. Her personality is just fantastic and really fun to read. I really enjoy how she interacts with your version of Link (which is also wonderful). Her friends are great as well, each one with such a crisp and steady character flow. I can hardly believe I haven't stumbled upon this gem sooner.

I hope 2020 is suiting you so far. I understand how life has a way of ragdolling for suspended periods of times. Just try to keep your head up above the riptide.

Looking forward to your next update!

I'm very glad I found this story to read. I love the way you've combined the different Zelda games and look forward to the next chapter!

Aw, wow, this was really good. A long-anticipated fight. :) I love so much about this story. First of all, Del and Link have a nice friendship building and they’re not just immediately jumping all over each other even if they’ve got some very clear chemistry. :) It’s more believable, and it makes it so much more satisfying when they have cute romantic moments. :) The plot is brilliant, and your writing and grammar are good. Looking forward to more! Take your time though—don’t feel pressure from us. :)

oh man, i've been really craving this story lately. thanks for the chapter.

i can't wait to see what you have in store for us in the future

Awesome story. I stayed all night to read it and I have to be at work in an hour. Worth it.

I need MORE! This story has quickly risen to my top favorite LoZ stories. Your characters are fun and relatable. Watching them change and adapt as the story progresses feels natural.

I almost had a heart attack, when I saw the email notification that this story updated, I was so excited! I love everything about this chapter.

I think I've said this last review, but I absolutely love Link and Del’s relationship and how you’re building it. At this point, I'm eagerly anticipating a future kiss at some point. (God, if there isn’t any kiss at all, I’ll be sad to be honest lol). I am also really terrified about what’s going to happen in the future. When Del and her friends can leave, that goodbye between Link and Del will give me a lot of heart break. How will there be a happy ending here? I hope there’s going to be a happy ending, I really hope so.

Another thing I probably already mentioned but I want to say again, I am in love with your characterization of Link. So far, your Link is my favourite, by far. How nice, caring and fun loving he is and courageous and all that but also 100% willing to rip a guy off by memorizing a map in a second. Also, the fact that he swears too gives him another layer of real ness.

I don’t know if I've mentioned this yet, but I really want to see this story through Link’s eyes. It would be so cool to read what he’s feeling and seeing at certain points. But that’s probably just me lol.

All in all, you have something amazing here and I can’t wait to see what you have in store. And don’t worry about taking so long, life gets in the way sometimes, we all understand. Thank you for sharing your story with us and I hope you have a great day.

Oh wow, great chapter! When I saw that you updated, I couldn't wait to read it! I wondered for a moment how Del didn't remember the room right away from Ocarina of Time (it is a little hard to forget for me, since I died in it so many times lolz), but that's alright. I can't wait to see what happens next, and I'm looking forwards to the next update!

This was so exciting to read! The fight scenes and the detail that you described the temple with were excellent! I’m glad that it was worth the wait, because it was a really good chapter. Also I love the growing relationship of Del and Link, and the addition of dark del. Amazing job!