Reviews for Selfless
PastOneonta chapter 3 . 3/16/2017
Very sad but with a lot of hope for Jake and Bella. I was thrilled she told Edward what she thought about him. Finally! I saw you were updating another story and thought I would check on your finished stories. This was good, Bella realized what she was losing in marrying Edward.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/22/2016
I can't imagine how tough it was to write this chapter but you did an awesome job! Billy's death was so sad. Glad Bella changed her mind and decided to live! I am so sorry this is the last chapter! Maybe, you might consider a few more? Hint, hint;). Loved it!
alixandria chapter 3 . 3/23/2016
I will miss this story.
twilightfanjm chapter 3 . 3/22/2016
This was amazing and beautiful. I loved it.
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 3 . 3/22/2016
Amazing! Simply amazing! I love your writing and i love this story!
Belladcmum chapter 3 . 3/22/2016
This is so good. I always felt like she would have changed her mind if she hadn't gotten pregnant. And since I lost my father at a really young age i always resented her character for just throwing away that relationship.
Taylor9901 chapter 3 . 3/22/2016
Tell me this is not really the end.
April-Showers82 chapter 3 . 3/22/2016
For all of the pain that had to be endured by both Jake and Bella, this was a good chapter to end on. The best thing Bella has done was honor Billy by choosing life, to live, regardless of whatever relationship she may have in the future. I'm glad that she was firm with Edward and that she made herself clear whether or not he wanted to accept it.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2016
I love it . Poor Billy, it's sad that he had to die to bring her Jacob finally together..
alixandria chapter 2 . 3/8/2016
Aww.. Poor Jacob, I hope Bella chooses to be with Jacob? He's going to need her even more now...
Taylor9901 chapter 2 . 3/7/2016
I love it.
asia.joanna.7334 chapter 2 . 3/7/2016
omg that charper is wery sad:( plis more soon
April-Showers82 chapter 2 . 3/7/2016
Oh, no! It's always that last bit of strength right before a person passes that hurts the living the most. So much hope is placed on those moments. What's going happen to Jake? He's still a minor. Will Charlie take guardianship of Jake until he is of age? If so, will Charlie move to La Push or will Jake have to go to Forks? What will Bella do now that Billy is gone and Jake is essentially alone? From her texts with Edward, I can't see her going back to him knowing what she does now. Does anyone outside of Charlie know that Bella called off the wedding? Is that part of the reason Billy let go?

Sorry for the long review. I just had a lot of questions to ask.
twilightfanjm chapter 2 . 3/6/2016
Poor Billy. I was sure he was going to make it. Poor Jacob.
corkykellems chapter 2 . 3/6/2016
Oh wow...thought for a minute He would make it...Good Job
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