| Reviews for Star-Crossed, Episode I: A New Path |
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Ranger-Nova chapter 5 . 8/18/2017 "You say don't get attached, but you put a master and a padawan together and what do you think is going to happen? What about the initiates in their creches? What about the beings on the Council? You can't tell me you're not friends, and friendship is attachment. It's just… it doesn't make any sense." Well, he's not wrong. "But I'll tell you this: change never comes… if the people who want the change… leave." The again, neither is she. Aww, the memory of the Twi'lek broke my heart... little Sherlock was so sweet though! And... GUESS WHO IT IS! 8D Oh boy, can't wait for the next chapter. |
Ranger chapter 4 . 7/7/2017 Yay, Jedi Sherlock Holmes! :D I really liked Ja'ali Se - hope we see plenty more of her! Kenit and Kytti continue to be great as well. "My parents were killed by a gang two years ago, and I've been surviving ever since—and I'm tired of it! I want to do something with my life that means something." This is such a good line. *hugs Sherlock* Now I'm really excited for the next chapter (especially because of you-know-who, because I'm predictable)! |
Phygmalion chapter 4 . 7/1/2017 I was surprised to see that the story takes place in an untouched point of the Star Wars timeline. That certainly helps give you a lot of leeway in developing this story as you see fit! I can't wait to see how it goes from here. And don't think I didn't notice the "Sky-Walker" reference. Looking forward to seeing how that turns out. Great job, and godspeed with the next chapter! |
Ranger chapter 3 . 6/29/2017 'He didn't even have time, really, to make his goodbyes to everyone; he would have to ask Grandmother to make them for him.' Oh no! :( The scene with his grandmother was lovely but so sad. 'Be brave for her. For himself, he couldn't, but for his grandmother… He straightened and raised his chin. "I… will. I'll become a Jedi, and then I'll come back and free you. I promise."' Awww. Love this bit, though. I look forward to the next chapter, especially if you-know-who should turn up. ;) |
Phygmalion chapter 3 . 6/26/2017 Aww, poor little Sherlock. :( Such a brave boy. His namesake would be proud of him. :) |
Phygmalion chapter 2 . 5/26/2017 Wow, this is awesome! Loving the concept! |
Math725e chapter 2 . 5/26/2017 im am really glad to see this fic again xD this is going to be arwsome, keep your amazing work going! i will see you in the next one xDDDDD |
cjnwriter chapter 1 . 2/11/2017 Oh my goodness! So glad I finally found the time to read this. Please continue! |
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 1 . 3/21/2016 Thank you. Good day, good night, and good luck. |
Math725e chapter 1 . 3/9/2016 aa, cool! this is a first! keep op the good work my man! |
Ranger-Nova chapter 1 . 3/8/2016 Ooh, I love the idea that Sherlock inherited his deductive abilities from his mother! Cecelle and Mycroft are so sweet! But ahh the ending... :'( |