| Reviews for Just This Once |
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   FanWhovianChick chapter 6 . 9/2/2017 I really enjoyed this! Great characterization and you did well with the 1st person pov, only lost it a bit in one paragraph in chapter 6. I would love to see more of these from you. |
| AliceCullen3 chapter 6 . 7/11/2017 LOVE IT! |
| Gumokoa chapter 6 . 4/19/2017 I liked the way you can actually make the POV believeable, with all the swear words and stuff, but you maybe would want to use different ones every two times. For example, the 'shit-eating grin' had me laughing like hell, but not so much the third time. Also, another recommendation is to do your research or to not leave medical stuff that vague. I'm not sure how Matty would get his inner ear fucked up with just hits to the head, and he would sway so bad, I think he wouldn't be able to stand up, especially if it was both ears. I'd say something about how painless Jessica seemed to be while she had been GODDAMN SHOT (with the pain just receiveing a couple of lines and almost no shouts), or how fast she healed, but I know crap about her powers so imma shut up XD Other than that, I would improve the redaction, but I loved it |
| HaloUtah chapter 6 . 1/27/2017 That was pretty cool. |
| lulu2613 chapter 6 . 10/6/2016 Yes they made one heck of a team |
| lulu2613 chapter 1 . 10/6/2016 I like already even though i dont like karen |
| Exploding Sun chapter 6 . 8/13/2016 This is a really cool story. A few grammatical mistakes here and there but still very good. |
| AvengerOfFiction chapter 6 . 8/1/2016 That's awesome that you're writing originals now! So cool! What genre is it? What are you gonna call it? What's it about!? Is there a website or kickstarter page or whatever connected to it?! Ah! So interested! |
| Jack Vander chapter 6 . 7/9/2016 Good story I've wanted to see them in the same story but its hard to imagine their characters interacting. Good job |
| Suteko chapter 6 . 6/6/2016 good wrap up |
| Nikki Pond chapter 6 . 6/5/2016 Thank you for writing this wonderful fic and how Matt and Jessica cross worlds. I love there is some action and this wasn't some kind of social call and stuff. I love it, and I definitely love the pacing of the story and the plot carefully moving. |
| Lets Random chapter 6 . 6/5/2016 I really enjoyed this crossover and thank you for your work! |
| Br0kenThOrn chapter 6 . 6/5/2016 Great little "Jewel" of a story haha get it. But fun read thanks for writing it. |
| suteko1 chapter 5 . 5/17/2016 oh boy...waiting is hard with this on |
| Nikki Pond chapter 5 . 5/16/2016 Yeah! I love the action scenes and the two working together :) Looking forward to the next chapter |
