Very good I love it ! It has a devastating them put perfectly put together into a great fanfic

are you dead?

2nd rival is cooking club president She is a warm, gentle, kind-hearted girl. She is a "big sister" or "onee-chan" type character. 3rd rival is drama club president might be Kokona. She will be a himedere 4th is the swim team captain She will be perpetually positive and energetic, and can be described as a 'Genki Girl'. 5th rival is Oka Ruto. 6th is the Substitute Nurse Her character trait is unintentional sexual innuendos. She is pure and innocent. 7th is the Substitute Teacher The teacher's trait is intentional sexual innuendos, and she will be sultry and seductive.8th is the Delinquent Rival Although she will not be evil, it is known that she has been suspended from school for something gravely serious. Not only that, but she is the most dangerous girl in is the leader of a gang, and she always has her cronies nearby. 9th is Senpai's Sister Her appearance has been updated as of November 28th, 2015. She does not lust after her brother, but loves him so much that she does not want him to get a girlfriend. She wants all of his attention. She is said to be one year younger than Senpai and two school years behind him. 10th is the Student Council President She will be a lot like Nayuta from Yumina the Ethereal VN. She will also be a strict disciplinarian.

When will the next chapter come out?

Poor Osana, I am so sad for Taro!

This is sad I bet yandere did it how come everyone likes yanderes and not the others

TBH, I think this and chapter 2 are well written, but I'd suggest making the chapters just a tad bit longer.