| Reviews for Smaller, More Honest Souls |
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Guest chapter 21 . 11/8/2019 Wait, the Guardian isn't Xehanort's heartless, Ansem SoD is Also, wouldn't turning Xehanort into a heartless make Xemnas again ? |
t1m3fr3ak chapter 9 . 9/28/2019 Ya hot the island of Menagerie wrong. it's a safe haven for fanus, not animals. that's just racist! |
Adam grimes chapter 41 . 2/9/2019 If it the end why does it say the beginning |
aslan333 chapter 41 . 1/6/2019 Excellent Story. |
Naruhaku96 chapter 2 . 10/3/2018 Keyblade wielders aren't supposed to let people know about other worlds. Yet we've already done that multiple times. |
the silver-eyed knight chapter 35 . 9/24/2018 How Powerful are Jaune, Sora, Salem and Ozpin compared to everyone else? Like I know that Jaune easily defeated Cinder and that Salem was practically god but if possible, can you give a number to each one of them to show how powerful they were. For example: Salem (300) Jaune (175) Sora (150) Qrow (90) etc. etc. |
Serafina Fairway chapter 41 . 9/2/2018 ...Wow... I started reading this story...a week ago or so? I'm so very glad I did. I was hesitant to at first, mostly due to the specifically listed pairing; I'm rather fond of the Sora x Kairi pairing. I ended up reading another RWBY x KH crossover on the site, instead. When I finished that, I ended up coming back to this one, still curious about the enormous word count and number of favorites. I enjoy a longer, in-depth story, and the numbers suggested just that. I admit I was most pleasantly proven wrong on my worries. The pairing started soft, though somewhat quickly in my initial impression. It was built upon subtly at first, and a semi-headcanon epiphany made most of my remaining doubts ease away. When the Rebirth Theory was explained, they were all blown away. Everything now made clear sense and I loved it. It was a pairing both new and still true to my preference. The story as a whole, I enjoyed immensely, especially how well the backgrounds and lore were built and merged into each other. I was going to go further with this, but it's midnight as of typing this and I lost my train of thought. Ugh. All in all, this was a brilliant piece of work, and has become an easy favorite of mine. I'll be chexking into the side-quel, as it was labeled, and hope you expand on this World you have invisioned. Keep up the good work, and good luck on writing that book. |
Keyblade5103 chapter 14 . 8/4/2018 Tbh while Sora was fighting Xehanort in final form, I imagined his voice and Roxas' overlapping each other. |
MysticSpider chapter 1 . 6/20/2018 Silly Sora, you're not Nagito. |
Kegeto chapter 41 . 6/13/2018 I actually love this story I hope you make a sequel to this. 10 out of 10 |
Solus451 chapter 41 . 6/9/2018 Thanks for the story! I felt your characterization of Sora was very accurate, and I loved his interactions with the RWBY cast. I particularly enjoyed Sora breaking out of neo's illusion and the final dive into the heart sequence. Sora confronting and accepting the loss of his friends was a powerful moment and had me in tears. I thought the callback to destiny islands and the tone of nostalgia and yearning for a time long gone was captured well. The final battle was a wonderful thematic and emotional blend of both franchises, and fit perfectly with Yoko Shimomura's "Somnus Ultima". I also appreciate the amount of planning and thought you clearly put into this; your clearly defined goals, arcs, and chacter motivations were a pleasure to read. Thank you again for all the time you put into this story, I eagerly await more stories from this universe! |
Darkmaster10000000 chapter 14 . 5/26/2018 Is it sad that I find Adam writhing in pain to be enjoyable? No? Alright then. |
fangs of death chapter 41 . 4/17/2018 The chapter was really good. I liked how you gave everyone a battle that they needed to fight to start moving forward. Overall the story was excellent. |
king kazuma3287 chapter 25 . 8/24/2017 idk what sora' s problem is he should just buy another keyboard on Amazon |
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 41 . 6/3/2017 interesting fanfic, well done |