This was so much fun! I really enjoyed it! Thank you!

I'm NOT sorry for Caro and Lydi

Poor Miss Bingley (sorry not sorry). Great story!

Cute story! You did wonderful, especially if english is not your first language! I am impressed i really didnt see any mistakes until the very end there was a tiny one but it didnt hinder the reading at all. Great job, great story, thank you for sharing!

super! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Oh, i really dont like bingley, he is so inmadurate, child, stupid

Good Georgiana!

yep

Aaaaah, simply i dont like Caroline!

very nice, I expecially liked the ending - not only because it'S a happy end for all those characters that are likeable. but also because it fits and has a sort of lesson to it

this is a very good story, you did an excellent job on it, but I must say that last paragraph was insightful and inspired. I loved it!

This is a good reason that guests are in the guest wing and family is in the family wing. She wouldn't even know which room is his. This makes it look like they are in one hallway.
But that works better for your story. Which is just hilarious! I have read this several times before and it's great!

Loved it

I really enjoyed seeing Caroline get what she deserved after trying to compromise Mr. Darcy into marrying her. Yay Georgiana and Lady Matlock for seeing to it and for not telling Mr. Darcy beforehand, who would have just told Mr. Bingley, who would have left Caroline free to try again, just like Georgiana said. Come to think of it, I think a part of Mr. Bingley actually wanted Mr. Darcy to marry his sister, otherwise wouldn’t he have stopped her from hounding him so relentlessly?

Lovely story, fun to see Miss Bingley’s plan being thwarted and love the epilogue that seems to give to each of our own character what they deserved!
I could have read more of Darcy’s lunch with his family after the failed proposal, but I guess that wasn’t the point of this story!
Thank you