is this abandoned if so that's a shame it was really great so far

Hey there,

This is a really great story! I hope that you will keep updating it, preferably at more often :D

I can't wait to see how the story will develop and for Jon to get out or start getting out of the pitiable state that he is in and start talking with Astor and be more confident.

I love this please update

Please dont tell me ramsay raped her

This is introspection/thoughts because your fic made me think (tis a good thing!) not meant to be true criticism.

Is Domeric Bolton already dead at Ramsay's hand at this point? Or are you going with the TV show canon that ignored his existence? Just asking because it seems as if you are hinting that she might be betrothed to Ramsay. I suppose that makes sense, if the King is willing to legitimize him, or if Stannis is willing to place him as Lord of Dragonstone by having him marry his heir. Although Jon Snow, her cousin Edric Storm, or half a dozen other legitimate second sons of Lords make more sense politically speaking. A lord from the Reach or Riverlands would make more sense even because it would tie Dragonstone to a fertile land that could lend support come Winter with supplies.

Anyway, quite an interesting touch with having another daughter older than Shireen and it opens a lot of interesting doors. Could Jon end up becoming Lord of Dragonstone to take the Baratheon name (the only reason I can see Stannis having his heir court bastards)? Irony considering his parentage. Also considering House Baratheon is also a bastard line of the Targaryens.

I look forward to reading more! Thank you for writing

This is so OOC that I stopped reading at the introduction of Lady Astor. I can swallow the marriage of Stannis being brought up 6-8 years (he was old enough, so why not? If necessary Selyse can be aged up a few years as not much is known about her father and none of her mother) as to sire a girl which would be in her teens in 298 AC but RED hair?
Ever head of "the seed is strong" and ALL genuine Baratheons being "black of hair and blue of eye"?
If you wanna self insert yourself as a redhead hotty shagging Jon in her dreams pick some other family.
I somehow do not expect you to lead this fic towards Lady "call me Astor" being a fruit of of Stannis wife's infedility.
Meh - a waste of time this ...
Borys

she befuddles him...it shouldn't be funny but it is; and endearing as well.

Wow this is so well written!

This is an interesting start. I hope that you continue.

Good start can't wait for a different path for Jon Snow.

This is a really good start. I like that you kinda skimmed over what happens in the show since we know what happens already. Keep up the good work :)