Guatdefoc, qué demonios está pasando aquí?! Bueno eso debería averiguar los mientras Leo esta historia XD

erm...
what.
multi-crossovers?

Perhaps I spoke too soon. This story is pretty entertaining. Although I still think your writing improved in the next story, this one is quite good as well.

Read your second story before this one. The other one is much better. Here, you have a god like OC that is afraid of doing anything. Very boring. Glad I did not read this story first or I wouldn't have bothered to read your other one.

Is the Soul of Fire a dark souls reference?

I know I'm reality late to this. sorry that I don't write reviews. I'm an unimaginative don't who can't think of anything else but "this I like". loving your work so far.
my favourite BGM would be Hikari to Yami (from original Bhusal novel, not the results nua one) because and Emiya theme.

Honestly that was a beautiful read. Subarashii

Damn, the whole house fell down the hill.

Dark souls?

Holy shit things make so much more sense now. I should've read this first. By the way are you using Moon Cells' rules or the regular FATE system for the servent Parameters

By thou suggestion I readth thee and I don't regret it one bit

is it just me or it change its pov too much it make one confused

This is well written, but I dislike the interpretation of Shirou and Scathach. Now, I understand you wrote this earlier and it could have been before Scathach's personality is known, but a HV Shirou would you admitted to "wanting to save everyone" and even tried to save a demon WOULD NOT torture Scathach. That's absolutely against everything he stands for as a hero. Sure, kill her but torture? Never

Beat his ass Shirou

Por fin terminé de leer el libro y me encantó aunque me hubiera gustado saber que más les sucedio a todos los demás.