sad that it will not continue it is a great story

A shame there's no more.

Guardians don't need to eat. It's optional.

So, did Atlas save the colonist or are they dead?

I am very impressed. atlas actually feels like a veteran guardian. and he seems just as strong as a give babe should be.

Kinda a shame you haven’t had time for this story lately. You write some good fight scenes, and the plot has been pretty compelling so far.

The concept was great but it could have been executed a bit better. Mass Effect have many reference to illicit substance; a good first step is to reference one of the many drugs, like red sand. As it is one of the most abused drugs in the Mass Effect setting you could do many interesting idea with just by linking it to the Darkness itself? Why not make it one of the scourges of every civilization ever targeted by the Reapers? And make it so that anyone who consume red sand end up being more vulnerable to the Darkness’ corrupting influence?

i hope that you will update this soon :)

Kinda sounds like Xur, but we don't have beef with the nine... and I considered taken, by those are Oryx's servants, and he was the worm god's champion, so that's also a no... I'm a life nerd! How have you stumped me? HOWWWWWWWW

i love it

the dreadnought if FAR bigger than a relay or even the citadel its 4000km long roughly thats the size of the moon, the citadel if to my knowledge 45km long so yeah... do your research lol not insulting you if im wrong about the citadels size please correct me thx

Can't wait for more!

Noooooooo! No one ever writes about the exo :( Oh well on to the next chapter!

I like it. I'm not sure if you mentioned it but I'm picturing Atlas as an Exo.

... that the MC simply tells some radom alien all his secrets destroyed this fic for me .

Stopped reading at chapter 2.

Good chapter!

Update again soon please!