A huge thing with stories, for me, are the chapter names & titles.

All of your chapters have been named spectacularly, and the plot is no different.

My two unacknowledged complaints for the story (so far, at least) are:

The overabundance of dashes, especially when they are following each other to have parentheses in parentheses.

And the unnecessary formality in the characters' speech. I mean, really, who talks like these versions of Nick and Judy do? Especially with their backgrounds?

An acknowledged critique is the inconsistent personalities, at least in terms with 'Zootopia' and your fanfiction universe. Of course, the review that provoked the response was downright rude with the wording, but the point remains the same.

A smaller thing that just... peeves(?) me is the title of 'Zootopia: If It Ever Happens' and the city's 'name' of 'ZootROPOLIS'. That's a minor thing though.

And, again, for all its flaws, 'Z: IIEH' is a wonderful addition to the fandom.

Thank you for contributing it to the community!

~S.

jaja nick fue estafado para tener una mini madriguera pero son felices y es lo que uenta jaja

Late to say at this point but I just started reading this story. While I have thought your characterization of Nick is a spot off, I think the whole story is good enough to over look a few minor failings. If they can be call that. But that level of bile, from that anon. Oh internet

Seriusly. You have got to be a real worm of a person to hate on some one like that with those acusations. Add homin, the first tool of the witless fools with butt hurt and self rightiusness. I would say more but the whiner is unlikely to see this, and I don't feel a need to use any more of my time on them. Note, I called them bad things and my crudest word was butt.

Any way person' ChezlBy your story is fun to read and I am sorry people are poopy heads on the interwebs.
This is fan fic. Its a free Zootapia fix. And these are your versions of the characters. At least its nothing like Venomheart's stuff. (If you like that stuff you do you but I need to sleep at night sans the nightmare fuel)

jajaa pobre nick lo evaucaron jaja de uno paso a casi casi acumular al menos no quería 275 bebés como sus hermanitos jaja

jaja super declararación que maldito cantante

rayos universo desgraciado

vaya día de trabajo cielos jaja pobrecilla judi la castigan por conportarse maduramente jaja

cielos se einvitaron solos

que zorra esa zorraaaa

cielos que lucha interna me recuerda a un anime

creo que la culpa de todo esto la tiene esa zorrilla y jaja que sueñote el de judi

pobre nick pero que gallina jaja y cielos judi ni sospecha y espero qe les de una buena patada conejuda a esos metichones de amistades o mejor dicho ronpe amistades

que rayos conejo creído ensima de metiche manipulador

hay en que se an metido o los an metido

Great chapter chez, keep it up! Nick and Judy's family is now 5 strong and throughout it both Nick and Judy couldn't be happier. Can't wait for ur next story of Nick and Judy. I'll check it out for sure chez.