I just come from a french translation of this story and can't wait so I come here read the original text XD. I love the way you mixed both stories.

Small inconsistency, in chapter 16 Toshiro and Hermione go to Muggle Studies after burning their Divination books, but in the previous chapter you mention he elected not to take the class.

Looking forward to the next posts!

So, until you posted that one-shot, i didn't get around to reading this. Why? Because I received the update, but I wasn't allowed to read the chapter. I forgot about it after that.

Sorry. XD

It was great as usual! I look forward to seeing the redone version. :D Now to read that one-shot. . . .

I just went and reread the whole thing to refresh my memory. You got a lot of interesting changes to work with here. Peter Pettigrew was imprisoned, so he can't bring the Dark Lord back. Sure, Voldemort does have a lot of servants, but his dedicated ones are all in prison, and nearly all of the rest probably would rather live in peace than bring him back. Also, Harry can live with Sirius for the rest of his life, since Sirius died because of... well, many factors that started with the resurrection of Voldemort. Without that event, Sirius wouldn't die in the fifth year, although after that is undecided. The tournament in the fourth year would likely be normal, without someone plotting to kill Harry, and without Cedric dying. And even if a servant other than Peter decided to help out Voldemort, it would be delayed, giving Harry time to learn more magic and ofc, master his reiatsu. However, all of this is based on the assumption that your new story will be continuing from the years with Hitsugaya in it. If your new story is in another universe, well, the points I commented on is out of the window, heh.

I love it. I started it before it we even reached the end and actually started in year 2. It's incredible to see your progression as a writer. For a while (no offense) I was unable to deal with the story but then I came back and found your style much, much better. Congrats man and good luck! I'm waiting for you.

When I read this review the first time, I was very afraid. I love what you write since year 1 and you left a lot of suspense in the year 3. About the suspicions of Dumbledore, about this strange woman in the inner world of Toshiro, about the meeting between Dumbledore and the director of the magic school of Japanese. And I was really waiting for year 4. I was eager to see how to pass tests, especially with dragons. I wished to see what Toshiro would do at that moment. And then the Christmas ball! I think that's what I expected the most! I wonder who would have been the rider of Toshiro ... Luna maybe ?

But by reading the note a second time, I was reassured. I was a little disappointed with the end, especially about their separation. But if you say you're going to continue, I feel much better!
I have a special request to make you, and I will send you a private message about it.
In any case, I am a very big fan of your work. And this story is one of the best I've read, really. I look forward to read more. See you soon!

I can't wait to read what you come up with next! And i agree it would be interesting to see how some of the spirits react to toshiro preforming a soul burial on them.

I have absolutely adored these stories you have written. Please do write the soul burial scene and post it. It would be nice for Toushiro to see them and how far they have come from when he last saw them. It would also be nice for them to see an old friend after everything.

Oh I didn't notice I didn't log in, and reviewed as guest, so just in case you ever wanted to reply to that overly long review, this is the account I use.

Still sad this ended, but I'll be looking forward to the next fic!

Great chapter, but your decision saddens me, although I understand it's your decision to make. This story was getting so good too. I hope that if you plan to create a story similar to this one, that you at least keep some of the ideas from this story. Of course I would love this story to continue, but it seems it's the end. How ironic, that the story should end with a title like "The End of The Light"

I'll be looking forward to the next story, although I hope that in the next one you will include more writing from Harry's point of view and maybe some more character development for both sides. Since I have noticed that this story was written mostly from Toshiro's pov and not as much from Harry's pov.

Anyways, even if you are disappointed with this story, I still have to say that it's been a very enjoyable read either way. I wish you luck on the next story, and will be looking forward to it.

This is a hood story but I am the type of person that needs detailed explanation so if it's not annoying could you explain what you meant in your note just a little more?

you dont need to expkain why you wont continue on this, just what you had planed and how the new story is realated to year 1- year 3.

Thank you for writing this beautiful, amazing series. I've loved reading it while it lasted :) Every time I saw that you'd updated it made me happy. You made something wonderful, and for that I am grateful :D I'm not mad at you for making this the last chapter, although I do feel a little sad. That said, I really look forward to reading your new fic! Write on, you crazy diamond!

-Watermelon

I completely understand your need for a re-haul. Good luck! I look forward to your next series :)

You're the author and can do what you want. I enjoyed reading years 1-3, and I'll be patiently waiting for the next series. Good luck.