Reviews for In Too Deep
Guest chapter 2 . 5/8/2019
This is pleasantly realistic, both for how it proceeds physically and how Sharon's emotional state affects that.
Rachel J chapter 2 . 7/20/2018
Just found this story abd had to read it twice! Wow!
Guest chapter 2 . 2/25/2018
This was amazing. Loved it
Guest chapter 2 . 12/23/2016
Absolutely love this story
ProfTweety chapter 2 . 6/23/2016
Definitely brought of some of the reality of aging and lovemaking into this fic. It could totally happen that way (without meaning to scare the young'ens) so it brought a smile to my fave as I was reading certain parts. I did love, however, them both being unsure and nervous yet being filled with so many other emotions that it seemed to overwhelm them at times. 'Stay with me' was a great line for both of them, each having their own meaning for it.
Darlene Graczyk chapter 2 . 5/20/2016
Oh my, that was so tenderly great!
MSUgirl2007 chapter 2 . 3/11/2016
Great job!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/11/2016
Terrific!
monkeyspajamas chapter 2 . 3/11/2016
Love it, love it, love it! Thank you for this beautiful chapter!
Leauh2o chapter 2 . 3/10/2016
Very nice chapter
Glad you did a follow up.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/10/2016
This one is more tender, and they're connecting emotionally. The next encounter should be warm and more comfortably familiar.
Maxi97 chapter 2 . 3/10/2016
Loved it ! Very deep !
StefanieWildermann chapter 2 . 3/10/2016
And again...you leave me speechless. ..amazing writing
Sharon o Flynn chapter 2 . 3/10/2016
Still dark, but lighter at the end. Lovely. Thank you!
elisabeth11 chapter 1 . 3/3/2016
If somebody is as beautiful, self confident, full of spirit and strong like Sharon Raydor we expect this person to have a very satisfying and fulfilling love life. And so we can read quite a lot of beautiful Sharon/Andy fanficiton rated M where their first time is wild, sometimes uninhibited, always exciting and of course they have at least three climaxes each before the morning comes….
I actually enjoy reading most of the other stories, unless the act and talk like hormone driven teenagers…
But YOUR story is so different, so believable, so in character, so lovely and so very special. I can imagine that it is difficult to bring back sex in your life after you stopped having it for a pretty long time and kind of got used to it and learned to accept it and found satisfaction in other parts of your life. Contrary to you I even think there was no other man in her life after the separation from Jack. And you probably right – to love and care so much doesn’t make the intimate side of the relationship neither easier nor better for them.
Like all the other reviewers I like to ask you to think about a 2 chapter. I would think there is a lot of hope that a little time will give them not only the chance of a working relationship but also the chance of real happiness and the return of sureness and lightheartedness…. You would make a lot of us very very happy…
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