you coming back?
plzz?

I have reread the whole story and love the little edits you've made. I just got notification that you updated it and I guess still going through the chapters. I cannot wait for Arc 5 and looking forward to how you will continue the story. keep up the amazing work. -A fan since the beginning

How the hell did Heinrich S. Schwindler survive a bullet to the head?! Why did John Rickman save Nick and his friends at the prison, only to betray them?

So many questions in my head...

Anyway, there better be a new chapter soon or I'm losing it ;).

great story. hopefully you can find the time to finish it

excellent story so far

I've demolished a good chunk of some of the largest wildehopps stories on fanfiction so far. God save me now that I know of ao3 now that I might have more big stories out there but either way can't wait to get sunk in to this story and get used to this writing style.

I finally, FINALLY got time to catch up with this story. I missed it, but I was terribly occupied. I'm happy you're continuing it!
I also know what you went through; I once lost gigabytes of data the same way and it hit me very hard. I'm so sorry you had to go through that too. Glad to hear you feel better about it and began writing again.
As for the chapter itself. Wow. Love your characterization of Wolford (and Fangmeyer, who managed to be badass even off-screen). Alan's betrayal I did not expect and sprouted a whole new series of questions! Why doing what he did? Was it a tactic of the Sturm all along? Someone from the Sturm went against the orders? Was it this Saul mammal? Or the second S*? Or is this the doing of a third power, maybe a powerful nation? Who is *S*?
This chapter was incredibly intense. So many were slain, others abducted, and our heroes are in lethal danger. And then that bomb right at the end of the chapter! Truly amazing!
Now I'm going to read chapter 44, really can't wait to see how it goes! Once again, great job, this was truly incredible!
P.S.: I added some more characters on my page on deviant art! Let me know what you think, please! Ciao

Story is carrying Me along with it. Very interesting take on WildeHopps early time. Revealing that the Lord of Sherwood Forest IS his daddy (even tho he DOESN'T know it yet!) was inconceivable! I know this is Your story (and Probably already past the point I'm about to make, but I don't chapter jump.) BUT I hope when Gordon offers them ZBI badges, they BOTH tell him "Thank you for this chance, but We want you to take those badges, polish them up til they GLOW, and then ... TURN THEM SUM BEECHES SIDEWAYS AND STICK EM WHERE THE SUN DON'T SHINE! We are ZPD for LIFE!" But, I can already read where the wind is blowing, and they probably WILL jump ship and join ZBI, am I right?

Nice, as a proud member o can truly appreciate the Metalocalypse levels of violence... well actually it's not THAT violent - but still, nice chapter my man.

*pokes*

Ow! Man, watch where you put that thing.

No way that he would ever realistically make that network of back-doors all by himself... thats the type of thing that takes a large team years and millions of dollars.

lol Grand Theft Auto XD

Are you still updating this?

I just finished rereading this story and I'm happy to see that there is more to come. Your story is undoubtedly my favorite story I have ever had the pleasure of reading I can't wait to see where this story goes.
Sincerely a fan

okay...so Nick learned how to use Conqueror's haki...
Nice...
but with that aside...
Nick woke the prime inside him but he is savage right now and, as we know, ot might take a week or something for him to get back to his normal state... or maybe the special case has something to do with it...
now... Judy.
Judy's leg is broken and with that probably a few ribs... The doctor is gonna heal her..of course... but the emotional trauma of knowing that Nick took the pill and went total savage is gonna be a lot.

Back to Nick, if the Sheriff managed to swim all the way back, whichis unlikely, other posibilities include that someone outside took a boat and picked them up, but that doesn't change the Fact that Nick is still in the Sheriff's paws... or paw...what will he do... he did say that he will not hurt Nick... but he kinda did, but i guess i can let that pass with the excuse of self defense, and to finish this long ass comment, The Bastard himself...

somehow... i already knew that he was *S*. something at the back of my head was telling me that And i want a flashback to how he came back alive with a bullet to the head. even if he is a prime... a bullet in the head is a big thing also how he managed to get someone to get him that fake muzzle... my guess is The German Doctor... they were, affer all, friends with each other, and knowing that he knows of the primes, the B animals etc and the nighthowler thing, i wouldn't be surprised that he is a part of Sturm already...
sorry for this long comment... and btw... i reread the whole story after you updated on Nov 1st. had to refresh me memory on a lot of stuff. i found that my love for this fic is still here and it is stronger than ever.