This was adorable!

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Nice little one-shot. The characterization, interaction, dialog, emotion and humor is good.

The wholesome standards are high. Nothing is offensive. God bless

Data Seeker

Awee~! That's kinda cute!

I enjoyed it, but spent most of it slightly confused on Conan's status. Is he Shinichi now? For whatever reason I wasn't able to be truly into the story because of it being unclear. -shrugs- Anyway, I enjoyed it despite that.

Awww, this was cute. I love that you chose to focus on Ayumi.