Holy fuck that was awesome.

I LOVE

this is beautiful qwq i hope there was another one. but you have made the perfect crazy Natsu, your writting was perfect. i loved it

Except the strange and insane plot ... and behavier of Natsu, it's really good written.

No! You can’t jist leave it there! I have to know what happened with Lucy’s parents! D:

You know...Now that I think about it, Natsu should somehow make Lucy as crazy as him. Ya know, pull off a Harley and Joker kind of thing but, not quite exactly like them. know what I mean?

Wow...one of the best Natsu psychopath OOC I've ever seen. Please update soon!

THIS IS FANTASTIC AND I LOVE IT
AND NEED MORE
PLEASE AND THANK YOU (I know you're tryingggg)
Seriously though this is definitely one of my favorites~
Cause let's be honest...who doesn't love a Psycho Natsu 3

one of the best fanfic I've read. Damn I almost had a heart attack :D. Wow just wow this is brilliant. I loved the idea of a pyscho sadistic manipulative Natsu! The story was just sooo amazing that you left me wanting for more...

I love this! Please update :D

What the flying F*ck? ._.
This Story is so...AWESOME! OH MY DEVIL!
I LOVE THIS TYPE OF NATSU SO MUCH AND IT WAS FROM THE VERY BEGINNING SO DAMN EXCITING!
I LOVE this Story so please write more! *silent fangirl squeal*

OMG LIKE LEGIT I WAS HANGING OFF THE EDGE OF MY SEAT WHEN I WAS READING THIS! I love the idea of phycho Natsu. When i reached the end of the story, i started freaking out like i wanted more and just-QWERTYUIOIUYTREWERTYUIGNGBITGNVUEHCNWUXNWNF...ok but yeah overall, i really like this!

MIRA IT WAS SO AMAZING AND WELL WRITTEN AND I JUST ASDFGHJKL;

Welp, that was as messed up as I expected. Kudos XD Frankly, I was kinda hoping that Lisanna was the accomplice, and make it even more interesting, but the way you did it was just as twisted, if not more XD And I'm kinda thinking Natsu and Zeref were maybe slaves or servants for Jude and Layla and were mistreated, and Natsu finally had enough and killed them, but I'm probably wrong.

Anyway for the actual review part; Story and plot wise, everything looked really well thought out, the only thing I would've liked to see added would be to explain how Natsu managed to escape so easily, because that wasn't properly depicted here. And I knew you don't go into his mindset for a reason, to keep the mystique, but having certain aspects of things explained in more depth to show just how much of a mastermind he is, but this is more personal opinion than anything I suppose XD

Grammer was about flawless as always, except I DID notice some typos in the form of missing words in a sentence which I cannot copy and paste and am too lazy to re-find and copy down, and some missing spaces, which only happened three times, so it's about flawless as from I can tell.

The characters were portrayed nicely, and my only qualm is it was maybe too much back-to-back dialogue and more accessing the situations than their thoughts (I think) I dunno anymore I'm too ADD to focus this long and I'm beginning to question myself XD either way, I still loved it, because I think I mentioned how much I love mystery? (It's why I adore Spiral, Ayumu is better than Sherlock Holmes) and I grinned at the parts where Natsu's whole plan came together, because I'm totally sane (not) and is it bad that I was kinda rooting for him at times? Thank God I have no real attachment to Zeref's character TuT

This felt like a REAL, good, mystery, and I love the atmosphere you built! And of course, if you did write a sequel, I have a request; I wanna see this Natsu broken, before he dies. Nothing is more satisfying than seeing a level-headed character snap, and leave the zone of a sadistic killer, to a TRUE psychopathic maniac who is literally insane. (I swear I'm sane)

Great story SS Mira :P I expect more greatness from you

One of the best T rated stories I've read in a long while I hope you continue it. Seeing Natsu as a sociopath in such depth was such a satisfying thing to read I can't help bu, wait for more.