Amazing story!

Hey there. Great story! Poor Legolas...I can't believe the torture he went through! So you're going to write another story, eh? I'll be following...I promise. I have a proposition for you. Do you know any Sindarin? If you do, I'd like to make a deal with you. If you help me with a site with the Sindarin word for "loyalty", I will help you with your spelling and grammar. I'll review each chapter of your story and tell you the spelling/grammar errors in the whole thing. You can trust me...I won my school spelling bee twice in a row. I know how to spell most words. If you don't know the Sindarin word for "loyalty", then, if you wish me to, I'll still help with the spelling/grammar errors. Is that what a betareader is? If so, then I'll be your beta, I guess. It's your decision. Thanks. I'm looking for "loyalty" cause I'm writing another story and I wanted to use that word as the title, but for the life of me I cannot find it! ARGH! Oh well. Just think about my proposition, please? :-D

*§ Legilmalith §*

P.S. Are you American? If I did beta your story, I'm Irish, so I spell some words differently, like colour, centre, etc. Would you like me to try to Americanize them? Lol, Americanize, my new favourite word...ok, now I'll really leave you alone.

Why did you keep using the word 'salve' instead of 'slave'? It was weird. The story was not bad though, pretty interesting.

oh, i thought that the 15th chapter was the last chapter...but, no comlants from me! keep writing!:)

never mind what eye said earlyer! u r very nice, 4 not leaving me with a cliffhanger this time! eye look foward to reading more of u'er stoyers 2!

of course I want another chapter. this is the best story I've read on

Hmm. Fun. Exciting to some extent. Goodness I'm braindead. Anyway. Nice job. I'm off to find something to restart my brain... some Mountain Dew perhaps... something... Luv lots, Eärendil

MORE NOW! I NEED ANOTHER CHAPTER! PLEASE!

sorry sherri not reading your story yet just like to to tell you that i finally caught up with you *laughs evilly. then runs up to author and smacks her on the head with the bat* sorry sherri but it had to be done. you used me as a sheild from your angery reviewers. *sticks out tounge* aw ya know i love ya

*cackles and cracks whip at Fluffy* Oh will 'e fall 'sleep if I play 'im some music? *grins* Anyway! Nice chappy. Continue! Luv lots, Eärendil (btw, welcome back)

how could you? you put the best LOTR fanfic story up, and then yoy put in cliff hangers. glad you put a chapter up today. it helps me get refreshed from the TAKS(Texas Assesment of knowledge and skills) math , and till is not a word. it needs to be I am not sure, but I think where celva says,"at last, he dies," i think the coma after last can be deleted.

It is great! More Please! Hurry!

HOW could u do this to me? i'm 1 of your reviewer's! u r so mean!

You... are... cruel!

But at least you have the twins in the fic. _ *snuggles twins*

Back to the cruel thing: how dare you leave off right there? Argh! you'd better have something on the 27/28th for us then! Don't make me get out my... uh... whip!... Cat-o-9-tales! Yeah, that's it. So hury! Luv lots, Eären

you are evil. I must know what happens! Now! or... or ... or... wait, your going to Texas right? well, if you don't update soon I'll tell the weather to keep bieng fall weather. ( I live in Texas and summer weather hasn't started yet, which is highly unusal, at least in the part of Texas where I live.)