You really captured how much the two care for each other. Their love for each other was shone almost every sentence of this. This was beautiful and I felt innocent reading it (which was ironic considering what it was).

This is absolutely sublime! I love the emotion and passion in your characterisation of Itachi and Shisui. The awkwardness and fumbling of their first time was tastefully written and beautifully real to my most first times. The sheer emotion at the end where you describe their feelings towards each other had me welling up.

Brilliant - thank you for sharing :)

Oh babyyyyyy~

So I wanted to reread your Kiri Nin Do Not Fall In Love story again (which I did) and then I noticed that you had so many more stories that I didn't know about so I started scanning through them and my God - a story about Itachi losing his virginity virgin!Shisui? Sign me the fuck up!

I liked it. I liked how real it was and again, there wasn't any dialogue but there didn't really need to be. (I mean, there was some italicized dialogue) but it was still good. So in character too what with Shisui being all worrisome and Itachi being all stubborn and shit.

I loved it. And as per usual - I'm going to suggest that a friend read it too!

I love how it was Shisui and Itachi's first time. I love how Shisui really cares for Itachi, and vice versa. I loved this story so much!