It doesn't make Naruto look good, if he throws himself into Sasuke's arms immediately after breaking up with Kiba (kiss already?).

I cracked when I imagined Mercedes Benz on Konoha's streets. That would be hilarious xD

Omgg I love it but when are you gonna continue it?

I love this fanfic! it's definitely worth the read, and don't listen to the reviews of the person who called you a fag because they are assholes who want attention and think that telling other people to die is fun. Which I think is completely sick, but back to the point that this was an awesome fanfic. Loved it, hope you have a nice day!

Why does neji have a mercedes

They don't drive cars in Naruto

good writing plot for an 8 year old girl... a little bit neurotic thought...
maybe you should tone it down a little
give the plot a little break and don't rush the important plot
give a little ambiance romantic situation first then drama later
and...please learn more lot of the proper nihon language and expression more for situations

but don't give up author! be brave and explore more of this fiction!

Kill yourself, delusional fag.