lol why did sans bite her I mean I woulda done the same but... ya ouch

Daaaayum sun ! 5 chaps and da gurl managed to get skele-bited 3 times ?! And for a important not horny reason ? I liek this stuff soo coool keep em' comin

This is sad! Make make chapters i want to know what happens!

Well that's a thing. At least he's no longer pummeling her in a blind rage. Should have kept making her eat afterwards though. Maybe recovering more of that HP would have helped her stay awake. *shrugs*
Anyways, can't wait to see what happens next! Maybe this time Ren will actually get to say what actually happened. And Sans can not be on a homicidal rampage so they can be friends! :D

Dude, moar

Omg that's... I wanna say adorable but that's the wrong word... can't wait till the next chapter though, I love this story!

I liked chapter five so much I read it twice, bro u gotta update I need to know what happens

Haha, the ending had me chuckling a bit. Papyrus really is just a giant sweetheart. Not a single mean 'bone' in his body. XD But I'm already so confused! Was that not Sans that found her? Was she hallucinating? He didn't seem to recognize her when he returned so I'm guessing he never met her in the first place. Was she even aware of being in snow? What about Frisk/Chara? I somehow get the impression that Chara tried possessing Ren... or something. I don't know.

Anyway, long ramble over, I like this story so far. :) keep up the good work!