| Reviews for Returning the Favor |
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SakuraS41 chapter 1 . 10/10/2018 That was sad... I was tearing up reading about the death.. But the scene that tied both of them together was really heart warming. |
GhostAnn chapter 1 . 12/12/2017 Thank You for writing this. |
Eion1783 chapter 1 . 8/2/2017 Read the author's note. I am also inside a coffee shop when I read this and I'm also trying not to cry! |
lupsss1412 chapter 1 . 4/16/2017 must...have...sequel...*cries* it's... just... too...damn ...beautiful! |
Wragziez chapter 1 . 9/27/2016 Loved this! |
Lollipop1141 chapter 1 . 6/29/2016 QAQ why did I ignore the Tragedy tag?! Darn it, the feels! |
DiscordianSamba chapter 1 . 6/25/2016 I wasn't quite certain what I expected from this fic when I decided to read it on a whim, but now I'm super glad that I did, because it's actually really great? It's really well written and I've got to say that I absolutely adore it. So good job! |
JetRavenOnyx chapter 1 . 5/30/2016 this reminded me of a fanfic I read where they're having a reunion but the Organisation gets there first and...well...they see their parents' bodies. Soooo depressing! ~KidLover1412 |
emmahoshi chapter 1 . 5/9/2016 this is really amazing wow i hope u write more stories like these i know it has been almost three months but i had to review it thank you |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2016 I really, really love Hattori-Kaito interactions, but there are so very few well-written fics that I have found centered around it, so I'm really, really glad that this exists! I absolutely loved the story, from the way it flowed to the characters. And Heizo's death also teared me up a little, which is pretty amazing, since I never cry. All in all, a fantastic story, and I hope you keep writing! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2016 Love it! |
NinthFeather chapter 1 . 2/29/2016 This was absolutely gut-wrenching but also beautiful. I love the way you set it up, I love the way everything ended up coming full circle, and I just generally can't get over how well you've managed to capture all the characters. The details in the descriptions-from the kakigouri to the more grisly bits-really brought everything to life, too. Also, I was really excited to see interaction between Kaito and Heiji that wasn't mediated by Shinichi, because that isn't too common in fic. Overall, this was just lovely, and I really enjoyed it, even if it did also make me sad. |
TiLiYu chapter 1 . 2/28/2016 I really like the idea of Heiji and Kaito interacting with each other so of course I liked that story : ) Having the two mirroring the same situation was extremly touching and, while it hurts to see a sad Heiji or a sad Kaito, well, damn, they had quite the good reason to and I appreciated the way you described it ! |
Hebiaczek chapter 1 . 2/28/2016 Tiny Hei-chan was so sweet~! I was so squeling~ He was trying so hard to help~ And later how Kai returned the favor reveiling himself to the detective~ Thank you for this heart melting story~ |
Lady Paper chapter 1 . 2/27/2016 Excelent story! |