Reviews for Returning the Favor
SakuraS41 chapter 1 . 10/10/2018
That was sad... I was tearing up reading about the death.. But the scene that tied both of them together was really heart warming.
GhostAnn chapter 1 . 12/12/2017
Thank You for writing this.
Eion1783 chapter 1 . 8/2/2017
Read the author's note. I am also inside a coffee shop when I read this and I'm also trying not to cry!
lupsss1412 chapter 1 . 4/16/2017
must...have...sequel...*cries* it's... just...
too...damn ...beautiful!
Wragziez chapter 1 . 9/27/2016
Loved this!
Lollipop1141 chapter 1 . 6/29/2016
QAQ why did I ignore the Tragedy tag?! Darn it, the feels!
DiscordianSamba chapter 1 . 6/25/2016
I wasn't quite certain what I expected from this fic when I decided to read it on a whim, but now I'm super glad that I did, because it's actually really great? It's really well written and I've got to say that I absolutely adore it. So good job!
JetRavenOnyx chapter 1 . 5/30/2016
this reminded me of a fanfic I read where they're having a reunion but the Organisation gets there first and...well...they see their parents' bodies. Soooo depressing!
~KidLover1412
emmahoshi chapter 1 . 5/9/2016
this is really amazing wow i hope u write more stories like these i know it has been almost three months but i had to review it

thank you
Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2016
I really, really love Hattori-Kaito interactions, but there are so very few well-written fics that I have found centered around it, so I'm really, really glad that this exists! I absolutely loved the story, from the way it flowed to the characters. And Heizo's death also teared me up a little, which is pretty amazing, since I never cry. All in all, a fantastic story, and I hope you keep writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2016
Love it!
NinthFeather chapter 1 . 2/29/2016
This was absolutely gut-wrenching but also beautiful. I love the way you set it up, I love the way everything ended up coming full circle, and I just generally can't get over how well you've managed to capture all the characters. The details in the descriptions-from the kakigouri to the more grisly bits-really brought everything to life, too. Also, I was really excited to see interaction between Kaito and Heiji that wasn't mediated by Shinichi, because that isn't too common in fic. Overall, this was just lovely, and I really enjoyed it, even if it did also make me sad.
TiLiYu chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
I really like the idea of Heiji and Kaito interacting with each other so of course I liked that story : )
Having the two mirroring the same situation was extremly touching and, while it hurts to see a sad Heiji or a sad Kaito, well, damn, they had quite the good reason to and I appreciated the way you described it !
Hebiaczek chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
Tiny Hei-chan was so sweet~! I was so squeling~ He was trying so hard to help~ And later how Kai returned the favor reveiling himself to the detective~ Thank you for this heart melting story~
Lady Paper chapter 1 . 2/27/2016
Excelent story!
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