That was quite a good approach of using fairy tail concept in Pokemon XY. I am very pleased to read this story because it shows a lot of entertaining and good stuff and most of all it shows true spirit of team work and friendship. I am quite excited to read the next sequel of this story.

ohhoohohh boy

jesus fuck, that's harsh. i'm excited to see them suffer later on

hmm, i do wonder if these OCs will come back later.

The motive of villain in this kinda unclear. I hope you would clear it up in next chapter...

Is it wrong that I want Seamus to suffer more? For him to force to release his Alakazam? After all that only fair to Bethany.
Anyway it’s good fight between brutal vs ketchum.
Oh I hope Beth and Chris and Rocky would leaves the other two.

Good job on the battle it was very exciting. Tho Serena seems unlucky huh? Always get ambushed by 2 or more people. Lol. Than again she is very lucky too that her team mates always appear just in time.

Would Brock fight Seamus next?

I wonder if it wasn’t inverted battle would May win the fight?
Love how Gary and Brock show up.

I’m surprised how easy Dawn defeat Aria... is it because Aria unused to Appeal battle? The rule certainly different than usually she use... still for Dawn to defeat her so easily is very surprising. Than again Dawn have type advantages.

Good fight! Would Seamus and his friends release their pokemon? Is it wrong for me to hope they would do that?

The performance is well written I think. Writing battle is easier compared to performance and contest I think. Than again battle also hard to do. Lol.

Brock is so silent here. Isn’t he usually more talkative?

Hmm... Girantina world can be called alternate universe, Unown too... and of course Dialga and Palkia space and time zone(?)... when time travel is a thing alternate universe isn’t that surprising. Lol

Anyway I want to ask, how old Ash, Serena, and the gang here?

The one watching the tournament kinda strange... I wonder if they got hypnotized or something?
Looking when Ash defeated Samus. He should release his own pokemon then.

Exciting run! Tho the thing with Greninja make Ash sure winner I think.

So May and Drew while Dawn with Gary?
Dawn vs Brock, Ariana vs... whoever it is, quite entertaining! Good job