I like your story but it was a little bit unfair that Edward got a chance to sow his royal oats if u will and sleep with all these women and Bella didn't even get the chance to atleast make all the way to second base with any of the guys she went out with

I'd find this story enjoyable if you didn't make Edward such a slut. Bella wasn't disgusted at all that he slept with 'half the girls in that room'.

No way he doesn't have a STD is his sluttiness was on that level. Especially if he fucked groupies too.

Liked your Bella and her outlook on life.

Usually I'm not a fan of Manwhore Edward but I'm making an exception for this story:)
Such a shame they wasted so much time but I'm glad they got there in the end.
Good luck in the contest:)
Me x

A bit fast on Edward side for the revelation. It woul have work best if he sort walk on them making out and intense emotion leading to lightning revelation. Or something else but here too easy too fast

Thank you so much for writing for us! We wish you the best of luck in the contest.

Crikey, he was a bit of a slag wasn't he! So glad Bella got her happy end

Adorable and hot

What an awesome rockerward!

Good luck in the contest!

This was so good! I really liked the history and build up, and surprised Alice didn't know how they felt about each other. Hope you continue!

Good reading

He could be my Mr Right Now too...*sigh*

Awesome!
Rox

Haha, that was so funny! You certainly have a way with words!
M.C. ... a national holiday for Edward's tongue...the back-bending on the stage and Bella saying that's got to hurt...:D
But Edward confessing his love to Bella, asking her to let him be her first even if she doesn't love him-that was kind of sweet.
Good story!