I've become so involved with this story and strange places your writing is great and so are the stories please continue writing the rest of these stories. loving them and continue writing because it is really good to read.

Great way to open the chapter! CaptainSwan sexy scene!
the eyeliner comment was hilarious!
Well! They're certainly devoting A LOT of time to this particular Operation aren't they?
I was waiting for her parents to come through the door and surprise them! Right in the middle of everything too! David's reaction was priceless! Could not stop laughing!
I bet Mary Margaret was thinking 'oh my god! We done it again!'
Killian's comment about 'not waiting until marriage' and David looking absolutely 'murderous' made me laugh (only Killian would tempt death just to tease David)
Awwwww! Belle and the baby :(

you know those two would have no problems AT ALL having a baby if they wanted one! And they do! And they are! I hope we see them again on the show!

This is quite cool, I can't wait to read what happens next :)

Yay Robin! GREAT STORY!

OMG I Looooove This Please Make A Chapter 4,5,6 And Gazzillion!Its Super Nerve Working And Amazing :-) It Feels Like Actuality Watching The Show! I Love Your Work,Have A Great Day

Heartbreaking for Belle. I hope she is able to heal. And sensitive for Emma and her family because you can't rejoice in your own happiness when someone else you care about has such a loss. Emma and Killian have been sweet together. I hope the pregnancy is uncomplicated for them both. Is there more?

I must say, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE your story so far. It's so different from the other pregnant Emma stories because it's so real, there's a challenge to it and I feel you've really caught the characters as who they are. I feel like a storm is coming with Emma being dazed after meeting Belle, am I right? We will see!You're a fantastic author, thank you for the read. I'll be looking forward to more!

So cute!

I need to read the rest of it! I can't wait to see where this story is going, I bet it'll be amazing and fluffy. I hope you can update soon because I'm really loving this. Thank you for such a cute story :)

Amazing Please post another chapter soon

Love it!

Poor Belle, I do hope Emma doesn't suffer the same as Belle.

I really love this story! Having to announce their pregnancy to the entire diner was a bit awkward for Emma, but I think everyone is truly happy for them.

I'm wondering about Gold. Is he going to do something to hurt their baby?

Yay! There'll be six parts. I really like the sweetness in this story, but the ending scene almost made it sound like Belle's trying to be manipulative. I feel kinda bad for thinking that, oh well. I love your story though :)

(And maybe you could change the status from complete to in-progress to avoid confusion)