I'm intrigued, keep it up

This is really, really good! It’s well-written and very interesting!

Even though it's only one chapter, this a very interesting and creative franfic! I hope that you'll decide to continue writing.

Damn, I wish you were still around to finish this. This would've been a great story, if you had an outline of what you had in mind, I wish you would post it and have this story up for adoption. Course probably they wouldn't have it as well written as you could've done it.

Sweet DTK please write more of this its amazing. I love how you've handled his duality in maka's eyes, and Danny's laugh about Soul and Maka thinking he's dangerous in human form is just beautifully well pointed

Not a bad premise, but I think it could've been done a bit more better. What I mean is there deeper explanation as to why Soul and Maka were at Amity Park finding Danny? Also, did Soul and Maka get teleported to Danny's world or something? I don't know if this is just a precursor for a future project or what not, but either way, I look forward to seeing more of this fic.

so good! will there be more?

Please update

Please update! This is too good to just stop!

Yes you should absolutely expand on this! Keep writing!

loved this!3 Please Continue with the story soon!

Please continue this. ;(((( I really like it.

Going Ghost!

Interesting... What will happen next?

Please continue this.