Ok this is getting good but if somehow this turns into a future earth scenario then im leaving.

Huh, so Metro in the second chapter is a Remnant in ruins in the future where Auras and Semblances have devolved into legends, myths, and fairy tales huh?

Holy shit, this fic is actually revived?! Can't complain, the first chapter seems great already, so here's hoping the next chapter comes soon!

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

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And Bella119 is dumb.

Hybrid of Fate is nothing. She needs mental help.

cathrl, do u want to be my daddy? I won't promise to be a good girl :D

CrystalRei should quit.

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An oddly specific Russian name for a spirit, though Artyom supposed that one might had been a Russian woman when it—or "she," for that matter— was still alive. Oh well. If I'm alive, then I'm alive. Besides, I have more pressing matters to attend to, like…

I love your spirit. xD

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

And Bella119 is dumb.

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"...Mother?"

Did you know each other growing up?. :-)

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

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"I missed you so much, y'know?"

By the chalice of Jesus, Reverend hermit, what is this infernal liquor?. O.O

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

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Taking a silenced VSV with a scope and laser, a Shambler with an extended barrel, three magazines of pre-war rounds (Artyom thought people outside of METRO might use a different currency, but just to be safe he gathered up four magazines of dirty rounds), some thirty-odd homemade buckshot shells, three syrettes for his personal medkit, two pipebomb grenades and one incendiary, Artyom filled his ammunition bags with the rounds and clipped his grenades onto his utility belt before slinging his VSV onto his backpack, his revolver back into its holster, and armed himself with the Shambler. It was not the best setup he was provided with, but it was better than walking out there without any weapon whatsoever. Hopefully, most of the fauna out here had no interest in eating humans.

He just recently introduced his new girlfriend to his mother. O.o

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

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Before he could identify the stranger, another screech came from behind―only this time, the beast seemed to be looming over them. Against his better judgement, Artyom glanced over his shoulder as a massive monster burst out of the forest and scuttled after them. His eyes bulged in horror. What the fuck is that thing?! It was a giant spiderbug, big as a entire building, and had white chitin, its black skin armored underneath, and ten angry red eyes. Its golden stinger shining underneath the sun's glare, the spiderbug snapped its pincers twice before breaking off into an unholy-fast sprint that surprised Artyom.

Nut was the Egyptian goddess of the sky. ;)

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

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At once, worried footfalls scurried in front of him, then a short shadow loomed over Artyom's head. "Artyom, are you alright!?"

Nothing to read... ;)

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

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A pale, open hand appeared in front of him. Without question, Artyom accepted it and the hand helped him up to his feet, but then he locked gazes with another girl―icy eyes, a deathly-pale complexion, and certainly a cold stare to boot. Her short hair, tied in an asymmetric ponytail, was like the snow permeating Moscow's streets in the winter time, and even her oddly-designed dress and boots―clothing fit for a fairy tale princess―matched her own hair. If it were not for the hideous scar marring her right eye, Artyom would had thought this lady was angelic in appearance.

What makes you think I'm going to help you?. :D

Down with Critics United!

They are the cancer to our society.

The root of heresy needs to be burnt to crisp

with over thousand innocent souls without remorse or guilt thereafter.

No sacrifice is too great and no treachery too small.

Remember, we all are walking under the immortal shadow of Him.

His light shines so brightly, it will guide us to our foreseen destiny that is in our grasp.

A great moment we all should not pass.

Praise Be The Emperor of Mankind!

If you are on the same page, cp this message.

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Out of the corner of his eye, Korbut had approached Miller and looked down on him with a sneer. "Ah, what a surprise! Colonel Rozanov, leader of the Spartan Order… or what's left of you and your brotherhood. How does it feel to be King Leonidas? I certainly feel like King Xerxes in this context, heh heh heh…"

The 5% topical solution was ineffective at reducing eczema outbreaks. :-)

...did you just diss the shambler...HERITIC

well this was even more interesting. I would have possibly written few parts differently, BUT I found your way of writing the parts that I'm not gonna mention, you wrote them better than I could've thought of them. I do really hope you will continue this story as this is getting really interesting.

hmm wasn't so convinced after first chapter but 2nd chapter gave enough interesting things off of itself that I decided to start reading the story and see where this goes, sure there are some typos here and there but still readable and interesting take on this one even if there are few stories with similar beginning to the story. D6 blowing up and whatnot.

Holy shite, I love this story. I'm actually kinda sad that it hasn't had any updates, though...could you please update it? I would love to see more of this w thank you for reading, and have an amazing day!~