Reviews for A Dragon's New Path
Joe chapter 1 . 7/27
Can you please update akame ga kill conquest of yours it is too good. Akame and others
R0gueMess1ah chapter 19 . 7/21
I appreciate you explaining your thoughts on your own story and why you’re ending it (rewriting). I have come to enjoy this story, but I have to agree with you on your points. He grew a little too much, a little too quickly. I personally don’t care for all of the crossovers, but you were making them work fairly well. I look forward to reading more of your works.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17
This is really sweet...

When a girl is quiet, a million things are running through her mind.

When a girl is not arguing, she is thinking deeply.

When a girl looks at you with her eyes full of question, she is wondering how long you will be around.

When a girl answers "I'm fine." After a few seconds, she is not fine at all.

When a girl stares at you, she is wondering why you are lying.

When a girl rests her head on your chest, she is wishing for you to be her's forever.

When a girl wants to see you everday, she wants to be pampered.

When a girl says "I love you." She means it.

When a girl says "I miss you." Nobody could miss you more than that.

Life only comes around once, so make sure you spend it with the right person.

Find a guy who calls you beautiful instead of hot, and calls you back when you hang up on him.

The guy who will stay awake just to watch you sleep.

Wait for the guy who kisses your forehead.

Who wants to show you off to the world when you are in your sweats.

The one who holds your hand in front of his friends and is constantly reminding you of how much he cares about you and how lucky he is to have you there for him.

The one who turns to his friends and declares "That's her."

If you read this, you have to repost it, guy or girl, or you will have bad luck for the rest of your life.

If you repost this, in five minutes your true love will call or message you.

Tonight at midnight, they will realize that they love you.

Something good will happen at approximately 1:42 pm tomorrow, and it could happen anywhere.

So get ready for the biggest shock of your life.

If you don't repost this, you will be cursed with relationship problems for all of eternity.

Repost this to your profile, and spare yourself the emotional stress.
Luciendar chapter 11 . 6/16
Was this your plan all along? Why build up Rias so much only to tear her down?
Luciendar chapter 10 . 6/16
I've never understood villains not killing heroes when they have the chance. The whole, I've got other things to do bit is kinda dumb in my book. Later on, they're always like "I should've killed you when I had the chance."

Oh well.
Luciendar chapter 6 . 6/16
This arch is pretty intense. I love the borrowed characters as well. They add a unique spin on things. I just wish you had let this fight, and those going forward, push issei instead of you making him seem so weak against Saji especially, but kuroka to a lesser degree as well.
Luciendar chapter 4 . 6/16
I love the story but truly hate your fights. It's probably just me but to me they suck. Balance breaker is supposed to be this amazing power and you're making it seem so weak. Saji is pretty weak. There's no getting around that. The blood trick was his ace in hole. Yet he somehow disposed of the scale mail... really? It just seemed so forced. Issei is supposed to seem a bit overpowered when he first gets the scale mail to show how strong it is against normal opponents. Three way your going here could never fight stronger foes. It's such a huge let down.
Umbrathefirst chapter 1 . 4/27
it's Gasper without the 'h'
dustinlemque chapter 19 . 4/15
where is the next chapter of this story please let me know
keller.blair1 chapter 3 . 1/13
Lazy ass delighting us with this great story and then Levin it unfinished
TatsuyaShiva4 chapter 19 . 12/30/2019
Omg no, better make Ise a Son of Amatsu-Mikoboshi or Apophis. Dante is so boring and weak.
TatsuyaShiva4 chapter 8 . 12/30/2019
MY Gof you put that Pyscho Esdeath in the Story? The only thing she deserves is to die.
TatsuyaShiva4 chapter 7 . 12/30/2019
To many Girls in the Peerage. Gilgamesh should be in there as a Knight. 3/4 dont even deserve a PLace in the Peerage.
Guest chapter 19 . 8/26/2019
Make more
Guest chapter 19 . 8/6/2019
If you really are going to redo this story, I have two suggestions.

1.) Get rid of Issei's past with Esdeath.

2.) Remove ALL the Rias bashing.
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