I have to say that I really enjoyed this story. There were times when you had me in stitches with laughter, especially that scene were Finn started that fight with Murphy. When Raven joined in and Clarke told everyone about her in Bellamy it was hilarious. Well until Murphy got angry and pulled out that knife. Just knowing they were all faking just made it so funny, that was definitely my favourite scene. I hope that eventually that you're able to finish it because it is a great story and it would be a shame if you don't. But don't worry I'm willing to wait so take as much time as you need.

It was really good

I have to say that I was glad to find a story set in the 100 universe where Clarke gets abused (by someone other than Finn too..) I don’t know why I was looking for an abuse story, but it’s always interesting with some character wump, though most of what I’ve found are modern AU I really liked this story so I hope you’ll pick it up one day!

nonononoonononooonnon I neeeeeed a neeeeeew chaaaaaaaapteeeeeeeer

So while I think you know that this fic needs a fair bit of clean up, ot also has SO much potential. I think going back and reworking this from the start would be a good idea, and probably help with your block too.

Ellen

Okay, so I downed this fic in one sitting (I hope that's a testament to how intrigued I am with this AU you created). Hm, a few things I guess?
On the different POVs: would it be too much of a shift if the rest of the updates are from an omniscient narrator? Or maybe limited to the more perceptive/central characters? I get that you're laying groundwork but limiting the perspectives might help make the story more manageable. Not everyone needs a back story. I was curious about how the Charlie-Wells bond came to be but it might be too late to introduce that (too bad because that banter would have been an interesting spin off). Will the Marcus-Abby-Thelonius triangle play a significant part in the story (like drive Jaha Sr insane enough to cause trouble be it in the form of messing up the alliance with the grounders or allying with the mountain men or bringing Alie into play again)? What of Lexa and the other grounders? Will they be playing a significant role in the fight? If they're basically a support army, I recommend focusing on the 100 POV. Basically, I'm wondering if the other chapters will be more Bellarke-centric or that's just icing on top of this intriguing AU.
On Murphy: Ever since Bellamy's romantic interest in Clarke has been thoroughly fleshed out, I've been wondering what role Murphy would take on next. Since he's decided to help Clarke, does this mean he's going to be a legit romantic rival? What with the literal close quarters in Mt Weather and what seems to be the beginnings of a sort of Oedipus complex - since he seems to see his mom in Clarke - it could be plausible... I'm not 100% sold on it but I guess if anyone could tame a beast, it would be Clarke. Unless you plan on making Murphy another close, loyal friend? I mean, since Bellamy has been bumped up to love interest, the loyal, platonic soldier is up for grabs. Like Lexa's Gustus, only for Clarke?
On Bellarke: Oooh, I kinda like that you reversed their roles here. Clarke goes in, Bellamy is out worrying and managing the alliance. Bellamy's interaction with Lexa could be interesting (they could be like Bellarke in the early days, on each other's nerves, pushing each other's buttons. Lexa's more harsh and blunt than Clarke so the banter could be interesting. And/or he could bring out more of her compassion and she could temper his passion). And what's with the comment about Cage(?) preferring to meet with Clarke instead of Bellamy? Is it merely because Clarke would be easier to overpower or is there some other sinister agenda (like some kind of personal/physical/prurient interest)? I do like that the plan is to tame Mt Weather, not destroy it. At the very least, the tech in there could open a whole universe of possibilities (if they had extensive surveillance, acid fog and missiles, i wonder what else they had there). Maybe the marrow could be donated in exchange for the way to reverse the drug used on reapers (might help ingratiate Skai Kru, maybe even the Mountain men, to the rest of the Coalition)? What of Finn and Wells? Are they no longer vying for Clarke romantically? Will Lexa be a romantic rival (for Clarke or Bellamy, that's up to you of course) or a solid ally all throughout?

Er, sorry for the insane amount of questions but I hope they help.

off to check out Nameless,
MostEvilIceQueen

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"We slay our demons. We don't become them." Goddaym that was awesome ;)
more!

Er, not sure if this has been pointed out (or if it even matters at this point) but are there two Atoms among the 100? Why is Atom helping out Monty and Travis in the search for a makeshift splint?
Oh, and that last line? Bloody freaking awesome. So agree with that ;)

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Awww! Bellamy waxing the drawings is so bloody GENIUS I wish it were canon! Heck, it NEEDS TO BE BLOODY CANON.
*goes to a corner to fangirl a bit more*
and woah, Clarke's got some seriously twisted version of Stockholm (I know it isn't quite that but I don't know what to call that level of submissiveness towards her pseudo captor). kudos for being to able to do that without being too graphic about Murphy's 'methods of persuasion'. I wonder if the succeeding chapters reveal a bit more on how Murphy reinforces his control (if at all) and how the rest of the gang snap her out of it.

Oh my God, Finn and Bellamy talking about Clarke and feelings is so cringe-worthy, I love it! I do hope that between the two of them, (three if you count Clarke) they'd finally be able to find a solution to the Murphy fiasco ;)

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*laughs maniacally* he thinks she's hungry for Murphy? the insecure idiot! how adorable. haha Go, E!

hahahaha that bit about Finn and medical supplies was gold! i still chuckle whenever i remember it. um, do you have a beta? I'm not really sure what they do but maybe they can at least fix the minor grammar errors? The errors are minor so they don't really get in the way of understanding the sentence/story.
as for Murphy, so far, he's cunning and violent enough to pull this kind of thing so it's believable. i wonder what fic Murphy meant by 'running around trying to make her smile' though... will the next chapters reveal this?
good luck, E!

Awesome story! I hope you comeback to this;)

Heres to hoping your writers block disappears soon, missing this story!

Amazing story please update soon