OHHH MY GOD! I totally did NOT expect Hina to be pregnant bro, I thought it was a hangover and that Hanabi was just pestering Hina, as always! Whoah, I'm completely blown away! How will Neji react?! The way you left the story HURTS, along with the cryptic first chapter! You HAVE to come back and finish this story, pretty PLEASE. Hopefully you'll come back someday. Until then, take care! Xx

Wow! Nice introduction to the story, I’m deep into it, hope you update cause this story is not like others I read yet!

Please continue this, this is amazing

I was so shocked by the turn of events here! I thought Hinata may have just been hungover or sick, but nope! We jumped straight to pregnancy! Ohmigod I cannot believe! I am so shocked . . . what will Neji think. I know realistically he would be freaking out, but I keep thinking of a little smile and a brief moment of 'my own family' before PANIC sets in because they are so screwed!

Since this is all thirteen years before the first chapter, I really wonder what happens? Sakura, Ino and Tenten-in this story-are such nasty girls, I almost feel like they would hurt Hinata (and Baby) mainly because I am terrified of angry and vindictive people being next to innocent and unaware people in stories.

But other than that, I don't feel like Sakura, Ino, or Tenten are bad people and most certainly not bad characters. They remind me a little of the bullies in Carrie where they're mean because of fucked up social norms and high school pressure, but beneath those layers they are not outright bad people. And Ino is trying but she's annoyed by how innocent and sweet Hinata is which, in any case, I feel is valid because I was like that too and I got so annoyed by how quiet Hinata was.

I look forward to seeing what you decide to do if you update!

:)

I am agog, I am aghast.

You really get the feeling that everything is about to go terribly, horribly and out of control down hill fast among the rosiness of summer and Neji and Hinata's blooming relationship.

I really love all the little details that made up this chapter, from the Clovers painting their toenails to the Hyuga Estate to the Hyuga family reunions. Everything about it was impossibly lovely and painted this landscape of the world you're introducing.

And, of course, the forbidden Neji and Hinata twist O.O

I really hope you continue this. I'm curious to see how the Clovers react to Neji and Hinata's affair

Wow, what will Hinata do? I love your characterisation of Neji. i do hope he supports her and doesn't abandon her.

I love how Sasuke and Gaara are interested in Hinata..would they make more of an appearance later?

This is such an interesting story and so beautifully written too!

Such an interesting story! AU are not usually my first choice, but you have an eye for describing high school minefields. I’m dreading the next chapters though; it feels like it might not be a happy ending for Hinata and Neji :(

It could be either Hanabi or Neji who did the killing...I think somethg happened to Hinata. Next would be Sakura? Ino would hve been the last to go, ne? This gets interesting.

Great story I think the way you write Hinata and neji's relationship is really well done. The only thing that could make this story better is faster updates. Keep up the great work

Actually it is Hinata's decision and hers alone since it's her body.

A crime one is pretty much rare for Nejihina fic.