Reviews for Fairy Tail: Crisis on Two Earths
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 7 . 5/29
I thought Jose was gonna be assassinated, but instead, he was freed by Deathstroke to apparently be inducted into the Legion of Doom. That will spell trouble Fairy Tail and Justice League down the line. Especially when The Legion of Doom is being covert at the moment, gathering info on the magical inhabitants of Earthland.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/30
I say is quite a story amazing
moewilltre chapter 1 . 4/24
hey what's your next update on this fiction chapter
Starlord Master chapter 7 . 4/24
Deathstroke just got his hands on Jose.

Happy April!
Etherious.Nat5u.Dragneel chapter 2 . 12/23/2019
Is this pre alverez war natsu because i think that even post tenrou natsu would be able to at least slightly singe superman but for him to be completely unfazed no way and post achnologia natsu would wipe the floor with supes cause i mean Natsu literally matched a blow with GOD LEVEL ZEREF! and he evaporated the entire lake in seconds the amount of energy required to do that is more than a super nova and given supses weakness to magic post alveraz natsu beats supes easy
Azure Chevalier chapter 1 . 10/21/2019
Maybe for the Edolas Arc add in the Crime Syndicate from Earth-3 make look like the Boom Tube portal affected other earths and have Superman Batman Wonder Woman Green Lantern The Flash Martian Manhunter Shazam Firestorm Cyborg Aquaman The Atom since there the Syndicates doubles just like Fairy Tail
Firebreather18 chapter 1 . 8/21/2019
how the fuck is superman beating up mages like that his kind is weak against MAGIC so when natsu punch him with his fire dist and exploded he wouldn't have just stood their like a fly landed on him he would of be in great pain plus dont get me started on fucking Batman of all people and Batman is my favorite DC character the ur a awesome writer but ur ideas on DC and fairytail need alot of work buddy
DCAU follower chapter 6 . 8/13/2019
Yeeeeaaah... Doctor Fate really did destroy the Jupiter Canon because he is omnipotent. Doctor Fate could’ve frozen time to take out all the Phantom Lord members, but that would’ve taken away the fun. Not complaining this arc ended quickly though.

Hope Plastic Man interacts with everyone else in Fairy Tail.

Make sure to have the other Fairy Tail guild mates shine and interact with the Justice League. Interactions like these would be nice:
Green Lantern or Firestorm and Natsu
Plastic Man and Happy
Lucy and Zatanna
Erza and Wonder Woman
Martian Manhunter and Elfman
Levy and Hawkgirl
Red Tornado and Mirajane
Jet and Flash
Gray and Cyborg
Cana and the Atom (random encounter)
Wakaba and Macao speaking with Black Lightning
Loke and Green Arrow
Bisca and Black Canary
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2019
To the dude above me: you say one of the characters acts like a Mary Sue when I read your story and half of the characters are Mary Sues. You’re a troll as well. You basically stole a story from a Reddit archive and used it as your own idea. I’m sorry but you’re just pathetic. Like you are the most retarded person I have ever met.
freedzoneruin chapter 6 . 12/4/2018
Yeah you completely ruined the Phantom Lord Arc. You skipped over the fights and characters. Literally why did you even bother writing the arc then. You can have made a short reference saying "A week ago, we beat Phantom Lord" and that would have been more respectful than this.

Speaking of which two major problems with your story. One all of the Fairy Tail characters are treated like background fodder while Justice League characters literally do everything. That is just incredibly insulting to Fairy Tail fans.

Gajeel, Aria and Jose are treated like stupid fodder. The Fairy Tail characters might as well be bystanders. I don't think its possible that the FT characters could have been treated with any less dignity than this.

I get that the Justice League are a lot stronger. But if you are just going to skip over the Fairy Tail arcs, treat the characters like unimportant fodder and garbage. Then why even bother doing a crossover at all.

Natsu, Erza and Fairy Tail Guild might as well not have been there. They are clearly non important in your story. The Fairy Tail villains are treated like jokes and fodder.

Speaking of which power levels.

Now I get that Batman is a world class fighter but the biggest thing about him is that for all of his skills. He is not superhuman. Not that you could tell from fanfics like this one though. Because apparently Batman can now one shot mages. The biggest thing about Batman is that he is underdog. He doesn't have incredible strength like Superman, he isn't super fast like the Flash or have Magic like Dr Fate. What's incredible about him is his high intellect.

Similar to Gray, Batman is the strategist rather than relying on brute force like his teammates. He is the one who thinks of clever strategies and tactics to work his way around his opponent's advantages and figure out their weaknesses. Making you excited to see how he figures his way out of each problem. Yet here you just make him apparently all powerful easily beating powerful mages and intimidating Erza and Natsu as if he has immense superhuman strength and speed.

Another problem he can apparently easily intimidate anyone with a single glare. Yeah in the Batman series. Criminals are scared of Batman because of his reputation in single handedly taking down a lot of the big villains of Gotham City. The Phantom Lord mages are scared of Batman because the author said so. As far as anyone in Earthland is concerned. Batman is just a guy in a Bat Costume. That's not intimidating.

He also somehow has an unrealistic omniscient sense of everything that's happening in the fairy tail verse. Its like he watched the show or something for all the secrets. You know there's a difference between Batman being smart so he eventually begins finding out secrets of Earthland in clever ways and you just writing Batman as omniscient & having him somehow know everything.

Yeah I noticed that you are trying to make all the Justice League characters apparently god like to everyone in Fairy Tail. Even the weakest members like Batman and Green Arrow. If you want to give attention to them. Then do it in realistic way. Suddenly having Batman have the strength of 1000 men and having everyone unrealistically scared of him just ruins the story.

Instead of having Batman turn into a mary sue. You could have Batman try to figure out the magic out of his opponents and show how resourceful he is as he figures out counters to fighting mages. As he adapts to the new world. Like he does in the series.
alwynonlinereading chapter 1 . 11/28/2018
Any more chapters in the future
Guest chapter 6 . 9/6/2018
Do you have any idea Doctor Fate has an Omni-Magic and even Almighty Magic.

Omni-Magic:
Also Called:
God Magic.
Infinite Magic.
Magic Mastery.
Meta-Magic.
Nigh Mystopotence.
Nigh Omnipotent Magic.
Omni-Magic Manipulation.
Transcendent Magic/Thaumaturgy.
Ultimate Magic.

Capabilities:
User of this power like Doctor Fate, Shazam, & Dr Strange has unlimited access to all forms of magic and other mystical and supernatural forces. They can bend, break, and even create natural laws, distort the fabric of reality on a cosmic scale, perform unbelievable miracles, and create things without limit. Users are also immune to all opposing magic and can even break through all outside mystic defenses.

In short, the user seems all-powerful at first, but is actually at a nigh-omnipotent level.

Like Doctor Fate, Shazam, & Dr Strange has tremendous skills in magic and sorcery.

Almighty Magic:
Also Called:
Absolute Magic.
God's Magic.
Mystopotence.
Omnipotent Magic.
Primordial Magic.
Supreme Magic.
Total Magic.
True Magic.

Capabilities:
User like Doctor Fate, Shazam, & Dr Strange possesses the truest and omnipotent form of magic which surpasses all the rules and has no need for any justification as to how or why feats are accomplished. Magic, for the most part, is about feeling and gaining power from one’s emotions; this is why magic is the counter-balance to science. While Almighty Science manipulators may need to understand the fields of science to control their vast powers, Almighty Magic users do not possess that limitation, they are simply able to do as they feel.

This does not mean that Almighty Magic users cannot be omniscient; but, for the most part their emotional state won't change as much as a science manipulator's, even when they possess vast knowledge. Despite their great power and knowledge most Almighty Magic users will still possess noticeably human emotions, like anger and joy, or the need to be entertained; some may even become the embodiment of all magic, or the embodiment of the universe in which they reside. Regardless, the only real explanation you will ever get as to how these almighty users are able to accomplish such amazing feats of grandeur is "because it's magic".

Like Doctor Fate/Host of Nabu, Shazams, & Dr Strange/Earth's Sorcerer Supreme are the true source of all magic.
Meteor Gin chapter 1 . 8/26/2018
boring... should have used fairy tail after the time skip. it's no fun if they don't leave a strong enough impression
HeartOfChaos13 chapter 3 . 7/29/2018
I like this chapter and could Zeref defeat heavy hitters of Justice league.
HeartOfChaos13 chapter 2 . 7/29/2018
I like this chapter.
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