Hope you keep going! This story is great dude!

Probably the best fanfic I've ever read. Second only to Enigma. Maybe even equal to. The characters feel real, not empty husks. I'm very much excited for the next chapter.

This story is well written, well paced, and very enjoyable to read. I don’t mean it lightly when I say that this story feels professional. The characters actually have personality, rather than what a lot of lower quality writing has. It is very easy to immerse yourself in this story; a sign of a great author. I truly hope this story does end up continuing. I can’t wait to see what the author has in store.

An extremely nice and heartwarming story! Love both the character exposition as well as friend/love plot. Moreover, action scenes are genuine and well-made.
The language and absense of typos only add up to an already excellent mark.
Poptard, thanks a lot for this novel! It deserves a solid 5 out of 5!

Great story,hope this isnt the end tho

Love the story so far, looking forward to reading more!

I really love this story so far! Even though this chapter was a bit on the short side I am very excited to see more in the future.

this is pretty good

Ny

endearing tidbits in the beginning then random plot? in the middle intermingled with more endearing tidbits. i'm confused with the bipolar feelings but i quite love the story. you do quite well and i am definitely looking forward to the next chapter and any after.

Short but sweet

Hmm... almost imaginable

Aayyye, he’s back. Short chapter but it was good to see the traitor dead. Keep the snowball going! :D

This site needs more stories like this. Good work! Hope to see more soon.

It would be nice to see nat and mal start a family after the war ends. For now it would be best to focus on a major strike in the war and their first kiss.