Nice story

Great story so far!

This is a nice read. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

I liked the premise of your story and your characterisation of Hermione but thought perhaps Malfoy's evil scheme wasn't really evil enough. He was too kind and not really self serving as he was saving all the people/creatures that worked for him too which made me like him from the start. It was a really sweet read. Keep on writing - I can tell you're constantly improving.

I really enjoyed this story!

Nice romance. I enjoyed reading it very much.

FINALLY. The kiss you long enough!

Ok, first things first. This was a cute sorry and generally well-written, but there are a few aspects that I suspect turned off potential readers.
- Spelling: You had a lot of mistakes that wouldn't be caught by spell check (i.e. "desert" for dessert, "steal" for steel, and "que" for cue). They're distracting.
- The "Killers" theme: It has nothing to do with the story and is going to turn off people who aren't fans of the band.
- The lengthy, soliloquy-like dialogue: The characters often make emotional declarations for a whole paragraph, and it's really unnatural.

You have a lot of raw talent. You just need to find a good beta to hone it.

What a great ending! It was a lovely story. There were a few errors throughout but nothing that can't be overlooked! Thank you for an enjoyable read :)

Is the key to all the proceeds for S.P.E.W? I'm hoping so anyway. I'm glad Ron isn't in this story, I have never liked him in fanfics for some reason.

I wonder why if that's how Harry feels about Ginny he hasn't made a move to progress in their relationship...I hope we find that out!

Ginny is a good friend for being there for Hermione even though they aren't on the best terms. I hope Hermione returns the favour and listens to Ginny

That was so sweet that all the proceeds were to go to Hermiones cause! And they finally kissed! Such a pity the chapter ended on a sad note for Hermione and Draco.

The dress and bracelet sound beautiful!

Paparazzi ruining the moment! Can't wait to see what Harry's reaction to that headline will be!