ayy nice chapter

nice idea I guess, can't read after you gave him 3 bloodlines though sorry

please update again

Good chapter! Glad you've updated after so long!

It's fine so far... I'll just pretend I didn't read the "angry mob" references cause they make the stories unrealistic and I hate them!

Wow! Great story! Loving this! Please update soon!

Wow! I could feel the emotion and drama in this chapter quite a bit! Good work.

Good start to this! I'm enjoying it. A bit of constructive criticism for you though: it may get confusing when you have Naruto talk to Kyuubi with regular font, so use italics. That'd be a better option. As for the rest, before publishing a chapter, I'd advise you to go over it and look for any grammar errors. Unless English isn't your first language or whatever.

Now, in no way am I trying to offend you. I'm just pointing out some things and providing tips.

I'm off to the next chapter!

interesting.
good that naruto obtaining more than the boring futon affinity.
and droped his jesus christ holy mask.

do lemons

The OOC is kinda hard to accept. Naruto wouldn't resort to violence against comrades this easily. That part with Sakura should be a bit longer.

I guess I can check this story out but there is something I want to ask and that is could make the chapters well some what longer than what they are now because now the chapters are really short

Hm, do you really want to abandon the Toads? Why not have to summonings? Sasuke seemed to have 2 in the manga, Snakes and Hawks. Other than that, interesting start, if a litlle short. Some grammar mistakes here and there but nothing big

Will Naruto learn the Hiraishin and Rasenshuriken.